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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 1:44 pm Fantasy Story |
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Me and Robin will work together in this one.
Two heads are better than one.
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 2:26 pm |
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Good
I'll think of a good start and post it tomorrow.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 4:00 pm |
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Hmmm... This is bound to be interesting...
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 11:36 pm |
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General Introduction to the story.
Its a fantasy story filled with the might of hand and magic of the mages.
Where Wizards and Warriors fight side by side.
Magic and melee will co-exist in a world full of mages, warriors, thieves and many more dishonest people.
A world where no man can be trusted, a world with no honour, a world in turmoil and world of anarchy ......
The land of Silmaria
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 11:38 pm |
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CappyD if you wanna change the name of the place do so...
i just made it Silmaria temporarily.
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Thu Dec 19, 2002 11:45 pm |
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Silmaria, the land where innocent facades hide treacherous deeds.
The land where Dyrads, Minnotaurs and the undead co-exist.
Behind every door is another oppurtunity to meet a helpful friend or be decieved by a worthy advesary.
Such is the state of Silmaria.
Is there no one who can bring this once forgotten land of peace back to its original splendour?? Is there no heart which will take the challenge ?? Can no man stand up to the injustice of the tyrants and the evil of times?
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Fri Dec 20, 2002 5:00 am |
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interesting
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For i dipped into the future
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Fri Dec 20, 2002 9:52 am |
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Thanks VF.
We're working on a great beginning to a great Story.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Fri Dec 20, 2002 3:35 pm |
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The plot sounds interesting...
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Sat Dec 21, 2002 2:34 am |
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We havent come up with the plot yet !!
That was jus an intro
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Sat Dec 21, 2002 1:10 pm |
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What everyone is waiting for is finally here....
Ta DAaaaaa.
The Beginning of the story!!
This tale of mystery, awe, splendour and courage begins in the small and peaceful village of Aspreza. A small village with a population of less than a 1000 people. A happy village, which mainly fished and farmed for a living. Even when the times were evil and darkness dawned upon the world of Antara, the village slept a peaceful night without the slightest knowledge of the nightmarish destiny the future may behold. The Antaran Empire, which consisted of the only advanced beings on the planet, had just lost their King. The king was murdered in the palace. The Murder of a King could mean opportunities for the wicked, destabilization of an empire, the death of a civilization!
But little did the town of Aspreza know about this. In this town was a happy young man, Jon. Son of Jonathan Clegane and Rebecca. All Jon ever wanted to do in life was think, imagine and discover the mysteries of the world. Why did the sun set everyday and why did the ball fall back on the ground was what he wished to know in life. His day was spent Skylarking and thinking of the world and how it works. He also helped his father with he farming. Jon was a talented boy with a mind that could conjure up the weirdest of stories and could imagine what what could never be expressed by word of mouth. Such a great mind beckoned him to ponder upon the working of nature and search for explanations of common day experiences.
The only other place e ever went was the village tavern where adventurers and people from distant lands gathered. He would listen intently to the tales of adventurers to learn more of the world. The stories filled with wonder and fantasy interested him very much. He longed to find the truth behind the wondrous stories he had heard, about mages of the east that could control the forces of nature, about monsters that gobbled up towns and about warriors that could fend off an army.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Sat Dec 21, 2002 4:05 pm |
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Okaythen, this plot sounds intersting,,,
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Sun Dec 22, 2002 3:07 am |
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Thanks...
We'll post more of the story today hopefully
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Voy_Girl Admiral
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Sun Dec 22, 2002 8:04 am |
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cool...
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
Joined: 06 Feb 2002 Posts: 16756 Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 10:34 am |
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Alright....Im sorry I didnt write before...We probably should drop this...But I'll write my part now, anyways.
Jon entered the tavern. After a day of long work at the farm, he wanted to hear some stories. He looked around, trying to find someone telling stories. Yes! A bit away was a long table, a old man with a beard, dressed in robes was to begin to tell a story to the children and youngest of men that sat by the table. Jon took a seat.
"Cerwath! Cerwath!" yelled one of the younger kids "What story will you tell us today?"
The old man thought for a while.
"Oh, yes! Have you ever heard the story of the Twelve? The Twelve were Paladins, that fought the great battle at the Fields of Light. Alone! Against an entire army of cursed Undead and horrible Orcs..."
And so he told the story about the twelve Paladins. Theon the Swift, Tha�n the Clumsy, Sen�thorn the Smart, Felmoa�d the Arrogant, W�nw�ck the Foolish, Ganr�m the Ugly, Zand�re the Treacherous, �nr�n the Kind, Xarth�s the Selfish, Arn the Barbaric, Pet�r the Hardy and, Jon's very personal favorite, Jon the Dreamer. Those were the twelve, of which one betrayed the Holy Light, his name was Zand�re. He joined the forces of Darkness but was slewn by Theon the Swift at The Field of Light.
It was one of the greatest stories he had ever heard. He wondered if there was such a place as Galant�r, the seventh and highest tower in the great city of Kelmuin. He decided to ask more from the old man known as Cerwath. After the story was told the children thanked and left, but Jon stayed.
"Why arent you leaving, son?" asked Cerwath kindly.
"Who are you? Are you staying here for long? And will you tell more stories?" Jon asked quickly.
The old man laughed kindly.
"I am Cerwath Stormbringer, from the city of Kelmuin. Taught in the Tower of Galant�r." Jon wondered if he heard right...Kelmuin? Galant�r? They really exsisted? "And yes, I will be staying here for long. I have taken over the house of the deceased Thrain Andruind�n. And yes, I will be telling more stories. Tomorrow." He smiled.
"Are there really such places as Galant�r and Kelmuin?" asked Jon
"Oh, yes, there certainly are. I was born there." he chuckled. "But you best go home now....Whats your name?"
"My name is Jon" he said smiling broadly.
"Well, even Jon the Dreamer needs rest." said Cerwath smiling back. "Go home, Jon."
And so he did.
He walked through the dark village and was suprised how frightening the peaceful village could look at night. Every shadow looked like a bandit or a dreadful orc berserker.
Once he reached the house, his parents had already gone to bed. He sneaked up the stairs to his room and went to bed. He started dreaming dreams, putting him in the role of Jon the Dreamer...
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:06 pm |
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Very nice... Lets continue this idea, It isnt bad.
We'll write more
You cook up nice names I suck at making names...
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:12 pm |
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As you can see...I dont
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:17 pm |
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LOL...
Then we'll continue this story.. We'll write more.
I'll cook up more... You can suggest names for charectars I make up, In case the names arent too cool.
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:24 pm |
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A'ight.
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:29 pm |
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So will you write the next part, or shall I ?
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:31 pm |
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I think you should. However, I would like you to change the last name of Jon's family to .... say .... Clegane.
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:36 pm |
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OK... done
Now I'll write the next part....
We should write a part every 2-3 days I say..
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Captain Dappet Forum Revolutionist
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:41 pm |
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Agreed.
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Fri Jan 17, 2003 4:53 pm |
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Very interesting
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Robin Vice Admiral
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Sat Jan 18, 2003 8:15 am |
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Thank you
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