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Jeff Miller
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PostMon Dec 09, 2002 10:48 pm    Back from Death: Forgoten Heros

Chapter 1: Fate

40 years has passed since the end of the last battle Jeff is finding himself growing older he is now in his 50's and the demon menace is still growing he finds himself on the end of a losing battle.

Womans voice screams out of the darkness. "Help me please" There is a vampire trying to bite her he almost succeedes there is a voice behind him.

"Hey stop that." Says the voice it looks like a man in his mid 50's he draws a sword its blade is pure gold and is strong it glows.

The vampire looks at him and says. "Who are you? oh wait your the big bad hunter aren't you? Im really scared now."

"You should be." says the old man he than walks to the vampire. "Leave now or pay the price." the old man is having problems standing its clear he has been though alot and now time is taking a toll on him.

The vampire rushes the old man and punches him sending him flying to the ground the vampire kicks the old man over and over giving him a black eye. The old man trips him and grabs a steak and goes to stab him but the vampire grabs his wrist and squeezes he feels pain he screams. "Ahhhhh." the vampire than throws him off.

The Vampire gets up. "Prepare to die old man" he grabs him and goes to bite him but in the last second the old man steaks him saving his life the old man walks over to a tree and stands by it.

"I used to take those things out with half the strength now I almost die." he walks back to his home its a old school he goes into the bathroom and cleans up he looks at himself in the mirror and sees a old face gray and weathered he thinks to himself. "I can't handle this anymore I can't even last in a fight Im useless. I was Jeff Miller I was a hunter I was what the night feared I was someone now Im just a forgoten old man who is not known."

Jeff looks down and starts to cry.

To be Continued....

(Don't worry about my other story I will complete it soon I just have writers block)


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PostTue Dec 10, 2002 11:07 am    

wow... hard to be forgotten


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Thomas
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PostTue Dec 10, 2002 11:38 am    

Interesting and nice writing.


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Jeff Miller
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PostThu Dec 12, 2002 6:39 pm    

Chapter 2: Weakness

Jeff leaves the bathroom and walks around the school what used to take him just a few minutes to do now takes him about a hour, Jeff makes his way back to the office he is sore from battle he hasn't been in a fight for a few years he has been trying to stay away from the fights Jeff accesses the monitors and looks around he sees nothing than he turns on the radio and listens he starts to go to sleep at the desk he than has a dream in it he sees his old friends being killed in a major battle when faith is shot he jerks awake. Jeff looks around and than thinks to himself. "They are all dead I don't have anyone left." Jeff accesses the camara to the garage he sees the truck and he remembers when faith used to work on it just to make sure it still works Jeff walks over to the garrage and gets in the truch he hasn't used it since he came back to the base after losing everyone hes not even sure if it will still work its been years. Jeff turns the key and the engine starts to rumble than it starts Jeff is surprised he drives it out he decides to go driving he leaves the school.

Hours passed Jeff is still driving he goes into longview being carefull not to attract deomns just to be safe he grabs his shotgun he is driving around and what does he find he finds a vampire attacking a girl in a parking lot the girl is screaming for help Jeff looks and starts to leave than he stops and grabs his shotgun he loads a sliver bullet into it and gets out of the truck he walks over to the vampire.

"Hey Bloodsucker the woman said stop don't make me remove your head." Jeff says walking to the vampire

"Get lost geezer or your next." Says the Vampire

Jeff pulls out he shot gun and takes aim. "Leave or pay."

"Ahhhh" The Vampire screams running at Jeff

"Last warning don't make me do it." Jeff takes the shotgun and cocks it he takes aim the vampire still running at him Jeff shoots the bullet hits the Vampire and he gets dusted. Jeff walks over to the girl "Your......." Before Jeff can say anything his heart starts to beat really rapidly he falls to the ground the girl runs over to Jeff.

"Sir are you ok?" she ask but Jeff doesn't say anything he than passes out the girl holds Jeff.

To be continued........



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PostFri Dec 13, 2002 9:17 am    

Post teh next chapter NOW!!!!


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PostSat Dec 14, 2002 9:54 am    

Or NOW!!!


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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 12:22 am    

Chapter 3: The New one is Chosen

20 minutes pass since Jeff had his heart attack the girl looks at him. "Thank god your ok I was worrying about you do you need help sir?"

Jeff stagers to his feet and looks around trying to regain his senses and looks around. "No...No thanks I will be ok you should get home little girl its not safe out here."

Before the woman can say anything Jeff gets in his truck and drives off the woman puts her hands on her hips and glares as the truck goes off. "Small girl? who the fu#$ is he calling little?" The woman walks off in the same dirrection.

Jeff gets back to the base and parks the truck in the garrage and looks at the celing and sees a leak. "Oh your back mr Dripy well tommarow I will deal with you. Jeff goes to the office and sits in the chair he listens to the radio looking at the security monitors and his heart starts up again he grabs his chest everything goes dark again Jeff passes out in the chair.


To Be Continued.......



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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 9:05 am    

cool!!


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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 12:37 pm    

Yeah!!! I have qualms with your signature though, I thought it was:

"He was a boy, she was a girl, can I make it any more obvious? He was a punk, she did ballet, what more can I say?"



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PostWed Dec 18, 2002 3:03 pm    

I have no idea what that song says, I have only heard it like twice...
If anyone was interested



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PostThu Mar 06, 2003 2:00 am    

Chapter 4: Deal�s

Jeff passes out in the chair from the pain of the Heart attack while unconscious he starts to have a vision in it he sees a demon but not just any demon an upper-level demon one of the most powerful ones he sees this demon having the power of time at his dispense all of a sudden Jeff feels a pain than he wakes up. The woman he saved is there and she�s slapping him.

�Hey wake up WAKE UP are you awake?� The woman asks

She continues to slap Jeff but Jeff stops her after the 3rd slap

�Im awake and how the hell did you get past my security system?� Jeff replies

The girl says. �That system may have been big 50 years ago but now anyone can get past it if they wanted to this is a nice pad you have here I bet you love the quietness . . . �

�I do indeed.� Jeff interrupts before she could finish than he says. �What are you doing here?�

She says. �Well I was worried about you I wanted to make sure that you were . . . �

�Im ok I don�t need anyone�s concern thank you very much.� Jeff rudely interrupts

�Well I see why you�re alone you�re such a grouch I feel sorry for anyone that knows you.� She retorts.

�GET OUT OF MY HOUSE.� Jeff yells at her.

�IT WOULD BE MY PLEASURE.� She yells back

The Girl leaves after the argument.

�Stupid woman I don�t need anyone now who was that demon I saw.� Says Jeff.

Jeff gets up and goes into the library it�s musky due to lack of use over the years Jeff goes to the back of the library and opens a demon book and looks up the demon that he saw.

�Hmm Tempus temporal demon this demon has the ability to change time and anyone he sees fit as one of the upper-level demons he is unbeatable he doesn�t fight prefers to use psyicolgal powers to beat his foes there is either two ways to reach this demon either use the summoning spell if he sees fit he will come or you can enter the gateway by using any crypt and the special chant if the chant is stated correctly a portal to Tempus demsion will open up. That�s it that�s what I have to do I have to get to a crypt I know what I must do Im going to ask him to grant me youth.�

To be continued . . .



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PostThu Mar 06, 2003 8:44 am    

Very interesting...


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