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janewaykat Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 May 2002 Posts: 5780 Location: Basketball court and college
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Wed Sep 25, 2002 10:43 pm |
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its great keep going
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
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Thu Sep 26, 2002 4:59 am |
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thanx janewaykat
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And all wonder that would be
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Lxe keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002 Posts: 3622 Location: stv
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Thu Sep 26, 2002 9:04 pm |
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- wrote: | god bless angeldust247... your comments are deeply appreciated |
God bless! yours are appreciated too.
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Fri Sep 27, 2002 5:07 am |
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you're welcome... and chocho_11, i almost did type it as choco... almost... i went back to double check... thank goodness... and i'm not sure how many chapters this is gonna last... sorry mikon...
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For i dipped into the future
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Thomas Pool Princess
Joined: 08 Jul 2001 Posts: 19730 Location: Manchester
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Fri Sep 27, 2002 11:50 am |
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Grrrr..... you would have been in so much trouble then.
Can't wait for the next part!!!
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Sat Sep 28, 2002 2:38 am |
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sry... next chap will come out after next week or after my exams... depends if my writers block clears... lemme ask you all a question... should i start with voyager going down to the planet or start with them already on the planet...
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For i dipped into the future
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Thomas Pool Princess
Joined: 08 Jul 2001 Posts: 19730 Location: Manchester
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Sat Sep 28, 2002 6:42 am |
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I think already on the planet, like being shown around or something.
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
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Mon Sep 30, 2002 4:41 am |
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i think i'll do that
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For i dipped into the future
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Mon Oct 14, 2002 8:14 pm |
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i've got the first part of chapter 6... problem... can't finish it... and i'm also gonna go through the first few chaps to edit them, cause i don't think the first few chaps are linked to the story (if there's one anyway.... ) ok... that's abt it
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For i dipped into the future
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Thu Oct 17, 2002 4:52 am |
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here's chapter 6! the first part anyway.
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Five hours later, the first batch of people had already beamed down to the planet and checked in to the hotel Remnysi, recommended by the commodore himself.
Captain Janeway had spent the last few hours giving the commodore and a few of his officials a tour of voyager.
After that, she had managed to squeeze in a few hours of assisting B'Elanna's repair teams in engineering.
It was then that Tom, together with Harry, had cornered her and requested permission to stay on the planet during the duration of their shore leave instead of beaming back up to voyager like they usually did. She had listened to Harry and Tom's recitation of the reasons why they wanted to do this and how everyone they had talked to had also been wondering whether they could do just that, while weighing the pros and cons in her head.
Finally, she had agreed, partly, because she wanted to get back to the repairs, and partly also because she thought that it would be good for the crew to get away as much as they could from voyager after spending months on it without a break. And judging from the number of people who had checked into the hotel, she had made the right choice.
Shortly after that, Lieutenant Carey had shooed both B�Elanna and herself out of engineering, knowing that they were supposed to be on shore leave.
She had just checked into her room and discarded what little luggage she had had beamed down with her. Now she was going around the hotel�s compound to �check it out� as Tom would have put it.
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For i dipped into the future
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Thomas Pool Princess
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Thu Oct 17, 2002 11:33 am |
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Great.
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Thu Oct 17, 2002 10:38 pm |
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thanx chocho !
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For i dipped into the future
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janewaykat Vice Admiral
Joined: 14 May 2002 Posts: 5780 Location: Basketball court and college
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Fri Oct 18, 2002 8:55 pm |
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very good
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Fri Oct 18, 2002 10:03 pm |
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thanx a lot janewaykat
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For i dipped into the future
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Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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Kathryn_Janeway_Jr Commodore
Joined: 24 Apr 2002 Posts: 2129 Location: Philippines
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Star Trek Voyager Lieutenant
Joined: 21 Sep 2002 Posts: 188 Location: U.S.S. Voyager
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Sat Oct 19, 2002 6:03 am |
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you have a nice plot devolping there! keep going
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Sat Oct 19, 2002 9:58 pm |
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thanx kaye! btw, nice banner in your sig. thanx star trek voyager. your stories are great too!
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For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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Lxe keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002 Posts: 3622 Location: stv
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Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:17 pm |
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janewaykat wrote: | its great keep going |
i agree, i'm enjoying story -_-VoyagerFanatic-_-
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Star Trek Voyager Lieutenant
Joined: 21 Sep 2002 Posts: 188 Location: U.S.S. Voyager
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Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:22 pm |
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go on! i give up my stickied story for you! anyway mines almost done
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Sat Oct 19, 2002 10:31 pm |
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don't give yours up star trek voyager! its not worth it... yours is much better, when r u gonna finish it?
oh and AD, thanx!
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For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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ussshorty Commodore
Joined: 30 Aug 2002 Posts: 1678 Location: in space,in the middle of nowhere
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Sat Mar 15, 2003 3:35 am |
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love it baby its so cool and amusing my eyes hurt after reading but to hell with that this story has got to have more chapters and if it does im looking forward to them already
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'VOTE KATHRYN JANEWAY FOR PRESIDANT'
ezri dax no.1 enemie
Tealc:He is concealing somthing
O'neill:yeah like what?
Tealc:im unsure because hes concealing it
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Chakotays Angel Captain
Joined: 04 Nov 2002 Posts: 776 Location: Twin Falls Idaho
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Sat Mar 15, 2003 5:34 pm |
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Great Story
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
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Sun Mar 16, 2003 5:03 am |
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thx!... but i stopped writing it quite a long while ago... writer's block... if you have any ideas pm me
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For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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Godzilla* Sophomore Cadet
Joined: 08 Feb 2003 Posts: 12 Location: philippines
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Sun Mar 16, 2003 5:55 am |
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I would like to have love stories.
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ussshorty Commodore
Joined: 30 Aug 2002 Posts: 1678 Location: in space,in the middle of nowhere
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Sun Mar 16, 2003 6:10 am |
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i have an idea how about somehow and this is just a wild idea how about Avril Lavigne gets beamed aboard voyager by accident but cnt get back to her major gig so she adjusts to life on voyager.
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'VOTE KATHRYN JANEWAY FOR PRESIDANT'
ezri dax no.1 enemie
Tealc:He is concealing somthing
O'neill:yeah like what?
Tealc:im unsure because hes concealing it
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