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PostSun Apr 28, 2002 5:53 pm    U.S.S Voyager- What should have happened

I will be starting my first story soon. This is the Table of Contents:

1. Janeway gets assignment at Starfleet
2. Janeway tells Mark her assignment
3. Voyager sets out
4. Starfleet and Maquis meet
5. Janeway gets Dear Jane letter
6. Janeway and Chakotay
7. B'elanna and Tom
8. B'elanna and Tom marry
9. B'elanna and Tom have kids
10. Janeway and Chakotay marry
11. future Janeway comes
12. Janeway and Chakotay has kid
13. Voyager goes home
14. 5 years after Voyager got home

I will start this tomorrow

As those of you tht read this know,it is a lot longer than 14 chapters.It will be 4 parts at most.


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PostMon Apr 29, 2002 3:13 pm    

Chapter one

Captain Kathryn Janeway heads out for her fiance's, Mark, house. Before she was able to though, the phone rang. When she answered it she realized it was Admiral Paris. He said that he wanted to see her at Starfleet Headquarters at 1400 hours, which was only a half hour away. When she got there, Admiral Paris asked to see her in his office and she said ok. While inside the office Admiral Paris Janeway some god news. He said, "Captain Janeway, I have a favor to ask of you. I need you to Captain a ship for a three-week mission in the alpha quadrent. If you accept this mission, I will be very pleased." Janeway said, "Of course I accept, but it can't be any longer than three weeks because I have plans in three weeks. When will the mission start? Paris said, " It starts tonight at 1900 hours. Is that all right with you?" Janeway said, " yes. See you then, I'll be here at 1830 hours." Admiral Paris said, "Ok, see you when you get here."



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PostMon Apr 29, 2002 3:31 pm    

Chapter 2

After leaving Starfleet Headquarters, Janeway goes to her fiance's house. She just had to tell him the good news. "Mark,Janeway said, " we need to talk." His responce was," uh-oh, I don't like that sentence. I didn't do anything." " You goof-ball, she said, " you're not in trouble. I have good news. I've been offered a chance to Captain a ship." "Oh,said Mark, " Did you accept? If so, when do you start? When will you be back? " I start tonight at 1900 hours, but I said I would be there a half hour early. I will be back in three weeks, just in time for our wedding. Obviously I accepted. Mark's responce was, " good, just make sure you are here on time." Mark makes supper, they talk about after mission, then at 1800 hours they kiss good-bye and Janeway leaves for Starfleet.

I will do two more chapters tomorrow.

Tell me what you think so far.



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PostMon Apr 29, 2002 3:56 pm    

Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 was good.

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PostTue Apr 30, 2002 2:35 pm    

Thanks. I'll do chapter three on Monday.


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PostFri May 10, 2002 6:57 pm    

I'm a little late, but here are three and four.


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PostFri May 10, 2002 7:17 pm    

Chapter 3

At 1830 on the dot, Janeway shows up at Starfleet Headquarters. She sees Admiral Hastings and Paris and says she is ready for her mission. Admiral Paris aasked if she knew hisson, Tom Paris. She said that she did, then the Admiral asked if she minded if he was part of her crew, but only as an observer. She said it would be ok, but she wanted to ask him a few questions. After Janeway interrogated Tom, she was shown her ship, the U.S.S Voyager. When the first officer saw her on the Bridge he said, "Captain on the Bridge." After that everyone on the Bridge stood up and looked at her. Her reaction was that she was surprised.She sat in the Captain's chair, but only for a minute before the Admiral showed her the rest of the ship, such as her readyroom, quarters, sikbay, her personal messhall, and everything else.After that, he left, she went to the Bridge and started her mission at 1900 hours, right on time.

Chapter 4

Janeway noticed that Tuvok, someone she went to academy with, was on her ship. She asked him he was looking forward to thier mission and he said that he was. Just then, her ops person, Harry Kim, noticed a Maquis ship wascoming into range and informed the Captain. She asked Tuvok if he wanted to go on the ship as a spy, for a little. He said ok. After Tuvok had been on the ship for two hours, the two ships got stuck in a plasma field. Both ships got stranded for two days and the Maquis shipwas destroyed. The two ships then joined together on Voyager, even though no one was happy about it.

I'll do Chapters 5 and 6 as soon as I can.



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PostTue May 14, 2002 3:57 pm    

Great Story


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PostWed May 15, 2002 11:10 am    

Cool Story!

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PostFri May 17, 2002 6:56 pm    

I'll be doing two or three more chapters between tomorrow and Sunday.


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PostSat May 18, 2002 2:44 pm    

It has been five years since Voyager set out and have been tryingto get home. A few months ago, Janeway and her crew sent letters to people at home. Everyone that hasn't gotten a responce, are waiting for them. Today Chakotay got Janeway's attention with a letter from her fiance. She thought it was going to say that he missed her and the such. Unfortunately, the letter was nothing that she expected. This is what the letter said: Dear Kathryn, I'm sorry that I have to say this. I have waited a lot longer than three weeks and also longer than everyone else for you to come home. I havedecided that I have waited long enough and have a new fiance. If you want to, you can write back,but you probably won't get a responce back. Sincerely, Mark. Janeway had read the letter aloud with Chakotay right there. Chakotay was simpathetic with Janeway over the letter. She had had a rough day and he knew it. In the end, Janeway said that she didn't expect a dear Jane letter to Chakotay.

Here's chapter six

After Janeway had gotten her dear Jane letter, her and Chakotay had become very close. Everyone was telling them that they should go out. Everytime a member of the crew said that Janeway or Chakotay said that it wouldn't be professional. After three months of the crew saying they should go out, they decided to havea secretive relationship so that no one would know. They did that for only two months and then B'elanna Torres, the chief engineer, found out. After that they decided to make it known. All of the crewwere happy when they all found out. One night after a long day of battelingKlingons,Janeway and Chakotay went into her quarters and were going to have dinner and talk about thier day. None of that happened though, because Chakotay started talking before dinner and it was a sensitive subject with Kathryn and they ended up having an argument. Janeway asked Chakotay to leave and she had dinner alone, but only a little, she had lost her appetite. The next day they didn't even speak to each other, expect for giving orders and that was it. The following day Janeway asked to see Chakotay in her readyroom to talk. While in there, they apologized to each other and said that them fighting was affecting the crew. Afterwards, they kissed and made up.

I will do chapters 7 and 8 in the next few days.



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PostSat May 18, 2002 5:36 pm    

Great story!

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PostFri May 24, 2002 7:54 pm    

Chapter 7

It has almost been five and a half years since Voyager and the Maquis met. B'elanna Torres is finally getting used to working with Starfleet. It has been avery busy day in engineering and on the bridge for her. She has been going back and forth between both places. Torres isalso sort ofinterested in Tom Paris,helm,and is going to ask him if he is interested in her. Before Torres could ask Paris if he was interested in her, he asked her if she was interested in him. Of course shesaid," It depends, Starfleet, are you interested in me? If so, then yes." He said," If I didn't, would I be asking you if you did?" That is how they started going out. Torres and Paris both told Chakotay and Janeway and they were delighted. Janeway's responce was,"finally, someone else besides Chakotay and me." Chakotay agreed. After a couple of days Torres,Paris,Chakotay and Janeway all had an argument and didn't talk to each other for two days. After that, Janeway asked to see the other three in her readyroom and saidthat theyneeded to atleast call a truce while on duty because the rest of the crew was starting to notice.When she said this, Chakotay apologized and Janeway and him kissed andmade up. With Torres and Paris there they said"Awe,isn't that cute" at the same time. Then they did the same.

Chapter 8

Well. it has been a total of six years since the ship set out. Tom has proposed to B'elanna and she said yes. They are getting married in a couple of weeks and everyone on the ship is invited. Janeway gave them two weeks off for their honeymoon. It's been two weeks and Tom and B'elanna are getting married.Everyone is excited and Janeway gave everyone the day off to watch the wedding. She is the most excited because she's the one who is going to marry them. After Janeway said,"I now pronounce you husband and wife," and they kissed, she said a few words about them. This is what she said," These two lovebirds that are in front of me are just about as perfect a couple can be. As all of you know, Chakotay and I are going out, and we have basically based our relationship on Tom and B'elanna's. They are very good role models, possibly better than Chakotay and myself, everyone should look up to them, I knowI do." With that, Tom, B'elanna, Chakotay and Janeway all hugged and were crying at the same time because they were so happy. After the wedding Janeway reminded the newlyweds that they hadtwo weeks off and she didn't want to see them until then.

Well this is the conclusion of chapters 7 and 8. I'll do 9 and 10 as soon as I can.



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PostMon Jul 22, 2002 10:57 am    

Chapter 9

It's been ten months since Tom and B'elanna got married.B'elanna is six months pregnant and is going to see the doctor for the six month prenatal appiontment.Tom goes with her, being a good husband and all.The doctor gives them the following news: "Well, I have some interesting news.The baby is a girl, the spine has a slight curve in it and she is ready to come out any day now." B'elanna's reaction was," Well, that is interesting news. I've always wanted a girl. Is there a way to fix the spine before she's born? I thought she might have this problem because I did. Are you serious that I'm almost ready to deliver? I can't be. I'm not ready. I haven't had any classes or anything. I can't do this yet." The doctor said," I can fix the spine,but it would have to be today or early tomorrow morning. You probably probably won't have to deliver for two days. You can take classes until then." Tom said,: Will they be alriht. I mean being three months early and with the spine." The doctor said," I will fix the spine and it won't be the least bit painful.The baby and B'elanna will both need to be under observation for a little after the baby's birth because she is so early." Tom and B'elanna said,"ok." And they left.At 0500 hours the next day thedoctor fixed the spine and at 0700 hours, B'elanna delivered. Tom,Janeway and Chakotay were all there to see it. Janeway gave Tom one month off and B'elanna two months.

I'll do chapter 10 soon.



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PostSat Jul 27, 2002 11:39 am    

Great story Keep up the good work.

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PostTue Aug 06, 2002 9:21 am    

Thanks.


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PostMon Sep 16, 2002 1:36 pm    

Your story is really good.


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PostThu Sep 19, 2002 11:59 am    

Good story. Less dramatic, but really good.


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PostThu Sep 19, 2002 5:01 pm    

Mind if I give you a suguestion? your basicly telling the plot...you need a little substance. Great idea though.


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PostWed Sep 25, 2002 11:12 am    

i think it will be a great story keep continuing

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PostThu Sep 26, 2002 5:02 am    

keep it going... it gets better AND better


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PostTue Nov 26, 2002 10:52 am    

Thanks everyone. Here's chapter 10.

It's been two months since B'elanna had her baby girl, which she named Miral,and they are both fine. In the past two months the ship has been attacked by Klingon and Kazons.Chakotay proposed to Janeway and she said yes,and a month ago they had a fight and it lasted for two weeks.Today is the day that they are getting married. B'elanna, Tom and the rest of the crew were invited to the wedding and are going.After the wedding, Janeway gave the Bridge to Tuvok, so that herand Chakotay could have time to themselves.



Chapter 11

It has been two months since Janeway and Chakotay got married and all of a sudden Voyager gets hailed. Janeway asked Ensign Kim to open a channel and put it on screen. An image of someone that is just like Janeway, only older and an admiral appears. Captain Janeway asked Admiral Janeway what she wanted and Admiral Janeway told her to let her on the ship and she would explain.So, Captain Janeway let her on the ship. When Admiral Janeway got on the ship, she explained that she was Admiral Janeway, an older version of the Captain.Captain Janeway had Admiral Janeway go to sickbay to figure out if Admiral Janeway was telling the truth. After theexamination, there was two differences in them.One was the Admiral had a baby and the other is the Admiral hada chipin her head. Admiral Janeway explained that the doctor put that in afew years after thisand that soon afterthis date she found out that she was pregnant and had a baby girl. She also explained that she was only there to get home sooner.


Chapter 12

Admiral Janeway was correct. It has been nine months since her visit and Captain Janeway is about to deliver a baby girl. She has told them how to get home. Tom, B'elanna,Tuvok, Admiral Janeway and, of course,Chakotay were there for the birth.Admiral Janeway gave Chakotay and Captain Janeway two daysoff, but then they needed to get the plan underway.

I'll do chapters13 and 14 as soon as possible. That will be either today or tommorrow.



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PostSun Dec 15, 2002 1:01 pm    

Chapter 13

Voyager has been in the Delta Quadrent for about eight years and finally, with Admiral Janeway's help, the crew will be getting home. They get home after surviving the Borg. When they got home, AdmiralParis andHastings were very excited. When Janeway went to her house, with Jessica and Chakotay, she realized it was different. Then she saw a note that was from Mark. The note said: Kathryn, when you do come back, you'll notice things are missing. This is because I took my stuff. You can come and get your stuff that I have. You'll get to meet me wife and daughter. Call before you come. The numbers the same, Mark.
After she read the note, she told Chakotay she had to go out for awhile and she'll be back in about two hours. When she got to Mark's house, it was spotless, not something she was used to. Then she saw him, his wife and his daughter. "So, what's your wife and daughter's name? she asked.The responce took her by surprise. Mark said, "This is Kathryn, my wife and Katie, my daughter." Kathryn Janeway said, "Well, that's interesting. Let me introduce myself. I'm Kathryn, Mark's old girlfriend. We were supposed to get married after the mission on my ship, but it took too long.It was only supposed to only take three weeks.I have a daughter, Jessica and a husband, Chakotay. I guess I should get my stuff and go." "I'm sorry if Mark marrying me upset you. Why don't you, your husband and daughter come over sometime, so we can get to know each other, Kathryn said. "ok, I need to get going.Bye." Janeway said.

I'll write chapter 14 next time
I'm on. My wrist is bothering me right now.



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PostSun Dec 15, 2002 8:42 pm    

its very good!!!


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PostTue Dec 17, 2002 7:13 pm    

Thanks.It might be a little longer than I thought it would be on the first post.


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