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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Thu Aug 22, 2002 3:57 pm Life Must Go On... |
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It was amazing how everything had fallen into place so suddenly. Everything had been perfect but something had suddenly snapped. Nothing was the way it should have been. Everything was blown away like sand in a storm.
Miral lowered her eyes, glancing down at the floor. She had cried for days and still the tears came.
Why did this happen to me? She thought. What did I do to deserve this?
Yet she knew that the event would have happened sooner or later. She just hadn't expected it as soon as it had come. The young woman sighed to herself, glancing out the window. She would miss them more than anything in the world.
Miral took a few steps towards a small table and picked up a small picture frame. A picture of Tom Paris, B'Elanna Torres and herself as a child sat in the frame, the faces of the three smiling brillantly. This was too much for Miral and she cast the picture frame away. The glass shattered and the tears came again.
" Why did you have to leave?" Miral cried out, sinking to the floor, pushing her hands into the glass shards. Her skin broke against the glass and blood spilled onto the black floor. " You didn't deserve to die." She whispered. " I miss you already." She whispered, putting her bleeding hands to her forehead, running them down her face. Miral sat on the floor, sobbing, her tears mingling with her blood as they cascaded down her face.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Fri Aug 23, 2002 2:52 pm |
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Awww!! Who died?? You have to contiue!
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Fri Aug 23, 2002 3:52 pm Chap. 2 |
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The day was bright and sunny, nothing like what it would turn out to be later that evening. Everything seemed to be going perfectly. The Paris family had been transfered to another vessel were Tom would work at helm, B'Elanna would work in engineering, and Miral would work as an ambassador. How could anything go wrong? The family was together (for once) and the ship they were choosen to work on was perfect.
" We're going to have so much fun!" Miral beamed at her parents. " And I actually KNOW some of the people on this ship."
" It was very kind of Harry to hire us on." Tom glanced at B'Elanna. " I'm sure he's a great captain."
" After living with him for seven years on Voyager, I'm sure he's a great captain." B'Elanna cut in. " Now... you better not get in Harry's way, trying to take him back down memories lane and all." Tom averted his eyes and glanced around.
" Who me? Try to distract Harry?" Tom tried to sound as innocent as possible, but B'Elanna fixed him with a dark stare. " Alright... I promise. I'll do my job and that's it."
" Good." B'Elanna smiled a bit, satisfied.
The small family pulled up to a port just inside San Fransico. A large ship sat docked there, its silver haul gleaming in the morning sun. The ship reminded Tom and B'Elanna of Voyager, but it was smaller, sleeker.
" I bet that baby can run!" Tom whispered, glancing up at the ship. " She's beautiful."
Here goes his obsession. B'Elanna thought quickly.
The small group made their way onto Harry Kim's ship, the USS DarkQuest. Once inside they made their selfs at home. All three of them had no idea what sort of adventures were to come and what sacrifices they'd have to make. They just enjoyed themselves for what time they had left.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Sat Aug 24, 2002 2:09 pm |
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Nice person descriptions...
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Zebedee Commodore
Joined: 19 May 2002 Posts: 2467 Location: England
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Sat Aug 24, 2002 2:36 pm |
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Yeah it�s a good story.
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Sat Aug 24, 2002 3:35 pm |
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Eh.. i'm kinda coming up with it as it goes. No real plot yet. I don't think... wait. LOL! Anywayz- i'll write more later.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Sun Sep 22, 2002 3:13 pm |
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we're waiting
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Star Trek Voyager Lieutenant
Joined: 21 Sep 2002 Posts: 188 Location: U.S.S. Voyager
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Wed Sep 25, 2002 6:51 am |
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nice plot so far
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Lxe keep dreaming
Joined: 11 Aug 2002 Posts: 3622 Location: stv
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Wed Sep 25, 2002 7:16 am |
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GOOD STORY.
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
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Thu Sep 26, 2002 5:00 am |
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not just a good story... a fantastic story! write more ok?
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For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Mon Nov 11, 2002 8:09 pm |
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I forgot this was here. LOL! I'll try and write more.
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Mon Nov 11, 2002 8:17 pm |
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The ship was a lot larger then they had expected once you were inside. The walls were sleek and grey in color and the bridge was immense.
" Tom!" Harry headed towards them from the bridge as the family appeared on deck.
" Harry!" All three of them chimed in together. Tom embraced his old friend quickly, smiling broadly. Harry embraced B'Elanna gently and turned his attention on Miral.
" Well... you have grown up." He smiled at her. " I remember when you were about 5 years old."
" Many years have passed Captain." Miral smiled back at him. " I hope to serve your ship well."
" I can already tell you are." Harry told her. " Have you seen your quarters yet?" Harry asked quickly, turning his eyes on the other two. Tom nodded.
" I guess we can live with them." Tom joked. " I think we'll be stopping in the mess hall for a bite to eat though, if that's ok with the captain."
" By all means." Harry nodded. " I'll see you all later tonight."
The family made their way to the immense mess hall. Outside the stars shot by the ship as she took off towards the Beta Quadrant. Miral glanced outside, watching the stars fly and for the first time a feeling of dread washed over her, like something was going to happen. That was the first feeling that she had. Something was going to happen and it would cause everyon's life to change forever. She turned to watch her parents and she bit her lip. This was something best disclosed only to herself. Miral turned once again to watch the stars.
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shrek man Whiz Kid
Joined: 14 Jan 2002 Posts: 5519
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Mon Nov 11, 2002 9:28 pm |
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Very nice.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Tue Nov 12, 2002 3:25 pm |
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Wow! This is a great new chapter, Ziona!
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Tue Nov 12, 2002 5:37 pm |
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Thanks .. i'll write more later
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Wed Nov 13, 2002 12:56 pm |
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good... this story deserves it.
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Wed Nov 13, 2002 5:31 pm |
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" Miral." Tom's voice broke through her thoughts and she turned to face her father. " The Captain wants to see us." Miral nodded slightly and left with her parents towards the Captain's ready room.
The inside of the ready room was clean, airy and comfortable. Miral studied everything about the room.
" Mr. Paris!" Captain Harry Kim stood from behind his desk and headed towards the Paris family. " I wanted to tell you about what our mission is at the moment. We're investigating an incident out in the Beta Quadrant. A Starfleet vessel was lost out there a few months ago and hasn't been heard from since. We're to go and retrieve the crew."
" If they're still out there." B'Elanna put in. Harry nodded at her.
" I want you, Tom, to be on bridge first thing tomorrow morning. B'Elanna I want you down in engineering. We've been having some problems with the core. It's being tempermental and I'm sure you can take care of that."
" With pleasure captain." B'Elanna beamed, smiling.
" Now, Miral." Harry turned to her.
" With all due respect sir, I don't see much need for an ambassador on this mission." Miral locked eyes with Harry for a moment.
" That's what I was going to ask you. I want you on bridge with Ops." He told her.
" But I don't hold rank and I certainly don't do ops." Miral started.
" I want you on bridge at ops." Harry repeated. Miral nodded, giving in. " I have plans for you Miral." With that Harry waved his hand to dismiss them. Miral left, her head down. First day on the job and she was already at odds with the Captain. Just like her parents.
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voyagermad Lieutenant
Joined: 20 Aug 2002 Posts: 166 Location: SCOTLAND
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Wed Nov 13, 2002 6:17 pm |
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Wow... thats all i can say
Keep it up
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Thu Nov 14, 2002 4:03 pm |
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It's great!! no exaggeration.
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-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- Rear Admiral
Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
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Fri Nov 15, 2002 8:53 am |
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^yup... its the truth and nufin but ze truth
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[First Time back online in 3 years]
For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Fri Nov 15, 2002 4:42 pm |
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... and that's the truth.
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Captian_Janeway Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 27 Jul 2002 Posts: 283 Location: Terra
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Fri Nov 15, 2002 6:20 pm |
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Sniff....Sniff...Wow. This story is going to be a tear jerker isn't it? I already have the sniffles.Sniff..Snif...Blow!!! Ugh...It's attack of the Snot part 2.
All jokes aside I love the story.
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Voy_Girl Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 8302 Location: Fair Haven
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Sat Nov 16, 2002 6:05 am |
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^ funny...
But, yeah I think the readers will need tissues.
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Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126
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Sat Nov 16, 2002 6:34 am |
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here, 10 boxes of tissue paper... free for all
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[First Time back online in 3 years]
For i dipped into the future
Far as the human eye could see
Saw the vision of the world
And all wonder that would be
-Alfred Lord Tennyson [Quote on Voyager's dedication plaque]
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Ziona Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Aug 2001 Posts: 12821 Location: Michigan... for now
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Sat Nov 16, 2002 12:57 pm |
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lOl! I never wrote a tearjerker before. *smirks* yea! LOL!
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