A J/C fanfiction- i haven't thought of the title yet

Kathryn_Janeway_Jr · **Sat Sep 14, 2002 1:26 am**

okay...

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

turn up the volume... and hopefully you'll don't have weak hearts... cuz if you do don't go that site

Kathryn_Janeway_Jr · **Mon Sep 16, 2002 1:37 am**

i couldn't get inside it though... what is it about?

voyagermad · **Mon Sep 16, 2002 1:55 pm**

Your story is really good you have to finish it

Kathryn_Janeway_Jr · **Tue Sep 17, 2002 12:01 am**

I AGREE...

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

geee... thanx people... i wish i could finish chap 5... i've got writers block... i've already written half of it already though... should i just post it?

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

oh, abt the site, its just wan of those where there's a song playing, then suddenly, this face will go BOO!!!

that kind of thing...

voyagermad · **Tue Sep 17, 2002 12:24 pm**

yeah post it we need to read!!

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

but its not complete!!! maybe i'll just post it and if anyone wants to be a kind soul and help me finish it up... or at least gimme sum idea on wad to write...

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

Disclaimer: Check the first chapter

�Energize.�

The alien materialized on the transporter pad in a beam of sparkling blue light. Now that she was seeing him in person, Captain Janeway could see that his hair and beard reached just past his waist. He stepped down from the pad with an air of confidence and dignity. He extended his hand out in a claw like manner.

�Greetings Captain Janeway,� He looked at Chakotay and Tuvok inquiringly, �and these are��

�This is Commander Chakotay, my first officer, and this is Commander Tuvok, the Chief of Security. If you could come this way commodore.� She gestured at the door leading out of the transporter room.

�Certainly captain.�

And they exited the transporter room with the captain in the lead.

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�This ship of yours, its amazing, Captain. You are lucky to be able to command such a fine ship� Commodore Lokan was scanning the ship�s interior with his eyes while they made their way to the Briefing Room.

�We would gladly give you a tour of our ship after the meeting with the senior officers.�

They entered the turbo lift.

�Deck one.� Ordered Chakotay.

Everyone in the turbo lift was silent on the short trip up.

The door finally opened after what seemed like eternity.

�Harry, call B�Elanna, Seven and the doctor� tell them there�s a meeting.� Called out the captain as she breezed through the bridge to get to the briefing room with the commodore, Chakotay and Tuvok in
tow.
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After a few minutes, B�Elanna entered followed by Tom then Harry and Seven, the doctor brought up the rear. They quickly filed into the room and took their usual seats. The captain introduced all of them to Lokan then gestured for him to start.

�Well, first of all, I would like to congratulate you all on behalf of the Omari Royal Police Force. The pilot of the other vessel, is one of our most wanted criminals. You have in fact, helped us a great deal by disarming his ship, he would never be caught if he managed to get away, and we would not be able to punish him for his crimes. Thank you.�
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i've decided, i'll post the first part, then i'll post the 2nd part when i'm done writing it... i haven't got time to finish it now even though my writer's block has disappeared... talk about irritating

Thomas · **Thu Sep 19, 2002 12:28 pm**

That was great.

voyagermad · **Thu Sep 19, 2002 1:02 pm**

More, More

Mikon · Fleet Admiral Joined: 12 Jun 2002 Posts: 12232

its been great so far, dun stop now!

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH i have got to get down to writting the second part... it seems so inc0omplete

janewaykat · **Fri Sep 20, 2002 9:38 pm**

keep writing must know what happened.........................

Very Good

Lxe · **Sat Sep 21, 2002 2:12 am**

hey like it.

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

Thanx...

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

well... here's the completed version of chapter 5

Disclaimer: Check the first chapter

�Energize.�

The alien materialized on the transporter pad in a beam of sparkling blue light. Now that she was seeing him in person, Captain Janeway could see that his hair and beard reached just past his waist. He stepped down from the pad with an air of confidence and dignity. He extended his hand out in a claw like manner.

�Greetings Captain Janeway,� He looked at Chakotay and Tuvok inquiringly, �and these are�?�

�This is Commander Chakotay, my first officer, and this is Commander Tuvok, the Chief of Security. If you could come this way commodore.� She gestured at the door leading out of the transporter room.

�Certainly captain.�

And they exited the transporter room with the captain in the lead.

�This ship of yours, its amazing, Captain. You are lucky to be able to command such a fine ship� Commodore Lokan was scanning the ship�s interior with his eyes while they made their way to the Briefing Room.

�We would gladly give you a tour of our ship after the meeting with the senior officers.�

They entered the turbo lift.

�Deck one.� Ordered Chakotay.

Everyone in the turbo lift was silent on the short trip up.

The door finally opened after what seemed like eternity.

�Harry, call B�Elanna, Seven, Neelix and the doctor� tell them there�s a meeting.� Called out the captain as she breezed through the bridge to get to the briefing room with the commodore, Chakotay and Tuvok in tow.

Less than three minutes later, B�Elanna entered with Tom then Harry, Seven and Neelix with the doctor bringing up the rear. They quickly filed into the room and took to their usual seats. The captain introduced all of them to Lokan then gestured for him to start.

�Well, first of all, I would like to thank you all on behalf of the Omari Royal Police Force. The pilot of the other vessel, is in fact one of our most wanted criminals. You helped us a great deal by disarming his ship, he would never have been caught had he managed to get away, and we would not be able to punish him for his crimes.� He paused to beam at everyone in the room, then continued, �I would like to invite your crew to a vacation on the lovely planet Omar, since you all have no use of the money reward that is usually given to the person who manges to apprehend a criminal.�

Neelix had a look of pure excitement and disbelief on his face. The commodore gave a deep hearty laugh, �I take It you have heard of Omar�s famous beach resorts?�

�Oh yes! And the cuisines! But they were all a rumor on Talax. It was everyone�s dream holiday!� gushed out Neelix, full of excitement.

The captain looked from the commodore to Neelix. His excitement was catching. A smile crept onto her face.

�Well, it�s settled then. The crew does need a break.� And frankly so do I, she added to herself.

___________End of Chapter 5__________

hope you all like it... any comments would be appreciated... thanx

Thomas · **Tue Sep 24, 2002 11:54 am**

That's great.

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

thanx chocho_11

Lxe · **Wed Sep 25, 2002 12:43 am**

COOL!! LIKE IT -_-VOYAGERFANATIC-_-

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- · Rear Admiral Joined: 20 Jun 2002 Posts: 4126

god bless angeldust247... your comments are deeply appreciated

Mikon · Fleet Admiral Joined: 12 Jun 2002 Posts: 12232

hey, do you have an estimate on how many more chpts this is gonna last? i hate the suspense

Thomas · **Wed Sep 25, 2002 12:41 pm**