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BlueGloe
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PostSun Aug 05, 2001 12:55 am    


...New Adventure...

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PostSat Aug 11, 2001 1:39 pm    

For what? TOS, or a whole new series?



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PostSat Aug 11, 2001 2:20 pm    

I would make a plot that included every series.They would encounter some old foes and some really dangerous new ones that would take the entire Federation,old and new,to destroy.


Number One,You have the Bridge.



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PostSat Aug 11, 2001 6:49 pm    

that sounds good, u should make an rpg. lol



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PostSat Aug 11, 2001 8:41 pm    

i would make... a story about (the DOCTOR!)



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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 12:05 am    

yeah! that is a good idea!



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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 3:50 am    

If I create a brief plot, Voyager with all its crew, except for seven, will explode into thousands of tiny pieces. Then Seven will be found my borg in the delta flyer and will be assimilated again. She will lose all her memory of the Voyager. And that's the end of the chapter.

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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 3:58 am    

Ooops, I forgot to put 1 on my last post; it should say "And that's the end of the chapter 1." There are actually five chapters. And the second chapter is:
Seven and the Collective finds at least fifty badges (whatever you call those things that the crew wears to speak with another crew member), and Seven had a vague premonition of Voyager and she is talking to the Captain, smiling. She could feel that there is something in her that got taken away from her, but could not remember it. The leader(what-cha-ma-kollit?) of the Borg sensed that Seven had the premonition so she summoned her and the leader performed a minor operation on Seven so she won't have that premonition again. That's the end of chapter 2.


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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 5:18 am    

Chapter 3


With Voyager gone, Seven has no other way of remembering that she was once part of a loving, and warmth crew. In spite of the minor operation performed to her by the leader of the Borg, Seven was still having this premonition this time, he can hear vague voices of the crew. These premonitions were tormenting her, and the leader of the Borg who can feel Seven did not bother to ask Seven for another operation. While the leader of the Borg paid no attention to Seven's premonitions, Seven had another premonition; the Captain and Comm. Chakotay giving her orders, suddenly Seven remembered that old crew, and in her premonition has an star-shaped odd torpedo. To be continued...

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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 5:34 am    

Chapter 4


With her memories coming back, her Borg perfection is trying to deteriorate, her human cells is regenerating. She tried to stay away from the sight of the othe Borgs especially their leader. She was also trying to think like a Borg and try to stay with the collective, but unfortunately Seven lost the collective, giving the leader a suspicion that Seven has changed back to her human form. The leader looked out for Seven and when she found her, she dragged her into a dark room, but is familiar with Seven. The place where she was brought when she was caught flying alone in the Delta Flyer after Voyager exploded. She was going to be reassimilated. She remembered when she was first brought to Voyager and her reluctance that eventually ended up with trust. The reassimilation process was imminent when suddenly an attack shook the Borg ship. It was by the Cardasians. The leader was needed because the Borg ship has discovered a new a new weapon shield against the Borg's weapons. Seven, still hopeless, thought of this as a way to escape. She looked for the flyer, and fortunately, although torn, the ship could still fly. Seven went aboard. I will post the conclusion tomorrow or later today rather because it's already 3:23 AM, and gotta sleep. I dont' know some of the Names of the Trek characters and weapons and stuff, so try to fill in the "Improper Trek" terms into the real one.


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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 5:47 am    

hey, good job, keep it up.



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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 6:01 am    

And now the dramatic conclusion...


While the Borg and the Cardassians were busy fighting, Seven took the opportunity to fly and escape. With the ship torn, it could not fly as fast and as optimized as it could before. The Borg who were wondering why did the Cardassians suddenly attacked had no chance to hail the Cardassians. Then Seven gazed at the two opposing parties and she saw what she had seen in her premonition; the star-shaped torpedo blaster(am not sure what you call it). She had seen that same torpedo blaster firing at Voyager when it blasted in her premonition. And she was definitely certain that the Cardassians blasted the Voyager. The fight was fierce, and all Seven could do is contemplate. She had to the conclusion that she will rejoin the collective because there is no point in being alone without Voyager. As she intended to land into the Borg ship, the half part of the Borg ship was being blasted into small pieces, while the Cardassian ship was still intact. Seven thought that everything seemed out of place. As she approach back more and more close to the Borg ship, the Borg ship is being blasted more and more. According to her calculations, the Borg ship will be blasted in no time. And her calculations turned into reality, the Borg ship is blasted just like the Voyager, but Seven thought that she had seen something being transported from the Borg ship before it was blasted. With her anger geared toward the Cardassian ship and prepare to set a collission course, Seven was hailed by a Cardassian officer and told her to stop. But Seven did not comply. The Cardassian had no other choice but too...blast...blast...blast their way out of Seven's way. The Cardassian officer tossed an alloy-plated tube into space and blasted it, that was the same thing that Seven thought was transported from the Borg ship. Once the alloy was blasted Voyager's tiny thousand pieces rapidly edged closer together and slowly they formed the Ship structure, then a blinding flash came out of the blasted alloy tube rendering the whole place unable to be seen. When the flash faded out, Voyager is now resurrected. Captain asked SEven to come back to the ship....This is the Final Chapter, but there is an aftermath... and this time I will create this later today, I will really sleep noww


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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 6:04 am    

The aftermath will is about Janeway and the Cardassians talking about the events that happened when Voyager got destroyed gotta check this out if you liked the five chapters, but if you didn't like them, you might wanna look at the aftermath, but I think the explanation of all the events is the best part of this "episode."

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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 6:44 am    

"The Big Blast" Aftermath...

Seven: Captain, I could not be more happy to see you again.
Captain: Me too, Seven. Somehow, we never thought that this ship will fly again.
Seven: What do you mean you never thought? Where were you?
Captain:We where in some kind of a dark space. It somehow looks like we are inside a computer because we could see the binary data transfer from Voyager to an energy server.
Seven: But Voyager was blasted.
Captain:The Voyager blasted in space, but that wasn't a real blast. It was actually energy's energy, information, and everything was being sucked apart by an outside energy. And we were part of that energy, so somehow our atomic structure was transformed into pure potential energy then once we were driven into this dark space, we were turned back into kinetic energy then as a living entity, but we can't see ourself, but we can feel everything.
Seven: So you mean somehow you all fit into that alloy tube.
Captain: If you saw energy come from an alloy energy that formed Voyager, yes that's us. We somehow knew that was going to happen.
Seven: You knew that you were going to be transformed and locked in that alloy tube?
Captain: Yes.
Seven: That's why you asked me to fly from VOyager.
Captain: Yes, and I also figured out that you might be assimilated again, so I asked you to go the Doctor before you left so he can inject you the repellant. That repellent was a little sensitive. If you tried to fight your human reformation many times, it will disable itself, but if you preferred to be human again, the repellant will gain more power and regenerate your human cell. And I believe you preferred to be human than a Borg because you are here alive and very human.
Seven: But how did you know that you were gonna be blasted?
Captain: We sense a Borg ship with some kind of repellant to our weapons and an extra ordinary never-before seen energy enveloping them. We were 96% certain of what was going to happen. We tried to avoid, but we did not have the chance, so I thought you would wanna be Borg again and I let you fly.
Seven: Unacceptable.
Captain: i let you fly, but you had the choice with the help of the repellant.
Seven: I believe that is not a valid reason to let my fly and reassimilated.
Captain: I had no choice...
Seven: But Captain...
Captain: Seven, that's enough questions for now.
--Captain walked slowly headed for the Mess Hall, when Seven broke the silence and...
Seven: Captain, I would like to ask you another question. It's about the Cardassian.
Captain: You said that you felt the energy in the Borg ship, but why is all the technology that you described were possessed by the Cardassians.
Captain: The Cardassian has been following Voyager for a few days now. They were on a cloak, and they thought we oculdn't see them, but we did.
Seven: Since when did the Cardassian have a cloak?
captain: I would guess they stole the cloaking technology of other ships capable of doing it, and examine the combine technologies to combine it with theirs and formed the cloak for their ship. We detected them because they did not have any of our technologies stolen to be programmed in their combined tech. You might probably never detected them in your scans because they only appear on our scan for a second or a fraction of it once in a while. Going back on how they outpowered the Borg is through their cloak, the Borg did not detect them, but the CArdassians did detect the Borg and made necessary changes to their part as a counter reaction to the improvements Borg was making in their technology.
Seven: So the energy was both from the Cardassians and the Borg.
Captain: yes, but I did not consider the Cardassians as a threat for they dont' have a record of our technology as the Borgs who trailed as did. And we could repel Cardassian power because like them, we could make the necessary changes to repel their weapons because of our information about their technology that was gathered in our earlier experience wit them. Do you still have any question?
Seven: No Captain, except why did the Cardassian resurrected Voyager.
Captain: Easy, because they will be honored to be the one to destroy us, and they don't want us to be destroyed by others so they kind of help too!
...........................................
Captain's Log Stardate 309281.3, The Cardassian ship has disappeared from our scans and everything is back to normal, but Seven seems a little troubled about all the past events.


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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 4:10 pm    

My brief plot gotten pretty long!

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BlueGloe
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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 4:12 pm    

I kinda liked it.


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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 4:17 pm    

yes, well breif, but good.



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PostSun Aug 12, 2001 4:20 pm    

Thanx, except I hope transwarp you're telling the truth this time. I remember you said the desktop themes were working, but they weren't.

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PostThu Aug 16, 2001 9:40 am    

Thats funny. In the post of "Making a movie with all casts" it was considered a bad idea. People didnt like some of the series. Anyway, it just seemed funny to me.

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