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Annika Wildman
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 Mon May 06, 2002 9:52 am I write star trek storys |
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 i will be soon putting up some of my star trek storys so i hope you enjoy them. 
Annika Wildman
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"I've Found Jesus.....
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shrek man
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| Mon May 06, 2002 10:12 am |
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Cool! 
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Mulder
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| Wed May 08, 2002 3:23 am Re: I write star trek storys |
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| Annika Wildman wrote: | i will be soon putting up some of my star trek storys so i hope you enjoy them.
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I'd love to read it!
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Annika Wildman
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Location: England
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| Wed May 08, 2002 1:40 pm My first one |
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'What's going on here' says Janeway
'Nothing' repiles Tom
'But there is a hole in the wall'
'Where?'
'Don't play dumb with me'
'Oh that hole, well i i i i i'
Tom says feeling 
Janeway was 
Niomie walked in looking 
'ha Tom is in troble'
To be contiued
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Leiutenant-Sones
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| Thu May 09, 2002 2:08 pm |
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he he i like it
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shrek man
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| Thu May 09, 2002 2:17 pm Re: My first one |
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| Annika Wildman wrote: | 'What's going on here' says Janeway
'Nothing' repiles Tom
'But there is a hole in the wall'
'Where?'
'Don't play dumb with me'
'Oh that hole, well i i i i i'
Tom says feeling
Janeway was
Niomie walked in looking
'ha Tom is in troble'
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Nice job.
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syd2002
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Posts: 8919
Location: Somewere in the world, makeing a difference
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| Thu May 09, 2002 7:32 pm |
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Thats funny 
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Mulder
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Posts: 2520
Location: Netherlands
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| Fri May 10, 2002 12:20 am |
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Now that was really funny
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Captain Dappet
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Joined: 06 Feb 2002
Posts: 16756
Location: On my supersonic rocket ship.
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| Fri May 10, 2002 1:58 am |
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Funny !
I wonder how Tom managed to get a hole in the wall...
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Annika Wildman
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Posts: 144
Location: England
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| Sat May 11, 2002 3:14 am |
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Tom was sleep walking,
so he didn't know how he put the hole in the wall
'Seven to janeway'
'Janeway here'
'Borg cubes 10 miles away'
'I'll be right there,tom fix the hole'
'Yes captian' 
Niomie giggled and left
IN THE BRIGE
'There sending a message'
'WE ARE BORG BEPERE TO BE ISIMULATED.
RESCTECE IS FOUTILE!!!!!!!' 
'full torbildos'
Bang all the borg cubes blow up.
to be continues
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Mulder
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Posts: 2520
Location: Netherlands
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| Sat May 11, 2002 5:06 am |
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That's very good! I wonder what happens next....
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Voy_Girl
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Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Fri May 31, 2002 4:01 pm |
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Great so far, Annika! I can't help thinking about how he did that hole..
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Zimmerman's Hollogram
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Joined: 24 May 2002
Posts: 112
Location: California
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| Fri May 31, 2002 4:24 pm |
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That's funny! tell me, did you intentionally spell that bottom stuff wrong?
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Besley14
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Joined: 19 Apr 2002
Posts: 341
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| Sun Jun 09, 2002 9:07 am |
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Funny, that was
More reading, I must do
wright more, you will
or
kill you, i will
(joking, I am)
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Trolluksient
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Joined: 04 Jun 2002
Posts: 49
Location: colorado
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| Wed Jul 24, 2002 10:39 am story |
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it really sounds like you just made those clips from the top of your head- why not put some effort, some feeling into your writing- make a movie of your story in your head. you need to live the character's lives, make them react the way they would react. these are keys to successful writing
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voy416
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| Fri Jul 26, 2002 8:08 pm |
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very nice story hope to hear more of it soon
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Annika Wildman
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Posts: 144
Location: England
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| Thu Aug 08, 2002 6:21 am |
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Sorry i haven't been on for ages but i been busy lately sorry
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I Do It My Own Way !
"I've Found Jesus.....
He was behind the sofa all the time ! "
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Annika Wildman
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Posts: 144
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| Wed Aug 14, 2002 5:37 am |
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Nionie:u sleep walk hahahaha
Tom: what oh no
janeway:tom to my ready room now
Tom:yes captian
In janyways ready room
Janeway:How did u get that hole in the wall?
tom: i donno ????
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"I've Found Jesus.....
He was behind the sofa all the time ! "
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Annika Wildman
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| Wed Aug 14, 2002 5:38 am |
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no just i'm not good at english
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"I've Found Jesus.....
He was behind the sofa all the time ! "
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Kat Moore
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Posts: 3241
Location: 6 feet under.
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| Sun Aug 18, 2002 2:57 pm |
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Hey those are funny!!!!
You better post more!
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PhionexAlpha
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Joined: 31 May 2002
Posts: 7560
Location: Anywhere you Look
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| Sun Aug 18, 2002 8:16 pm |
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yeah u better.
(wut else was i supposed to write?)
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voyagermad
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Posts: 166
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| Thu Aug 22, 2002 2:07 pm |
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You have to tell us how Tom put the hole in the wall!!!!
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Annika Wildman
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Posts: 144
Location: England
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| Mon Sep 02, 2002 11:48 am How tom got the hole in the wall. |
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Niomie walks in
Niomie:i know how Tom got the hole in the wall.
Janeway:how?
Niomie:I went to see if he was awake and when i got in there Tom, was standing there with his eyes wide open fireing his phaser at the wall all night.
Janeway:well from now on i keep your phaser while you sleep.
Tom:ok.
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I Do It My Own Way !
"I've Found Jesus.....
He was behind the sofa all the time ! "
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Tue Sep 03, 2002 1:32 pm |
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Yoru story is good , but your sig is sad .
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Lxe
keep dreaming
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| Wed Sep 04, 2002 10:39 am |
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I like it.
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