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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Tue Jan 29, 2002 2:09 pm |
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Chapter 7: The Death part 4
The Demon starts to laugh as Jeff hit the wall Jeff hit the wall and put a hole in it a mettle bar is wedged in it Jeff gets up and looks at the Demon he than looks at Faith fighting the Doomsday Demons Jeff grabs his sword and runs at the Master Demon the Demon looks at Jeff and laughs as Jeff makes his way to the Demon the Demon punches him sending him falling to the ground in major pain the Master picks up Jeff by the throat and impales him on the mettle bar Jeff screams and drops the sword �AHHHHH� Jeff than closes his eyes and goes limp. Faith looks over and screams �No�
Meanwhile at the Base
�I need to go� Jean pleads, �Jeff said that we have to stay here.� Katie replied Jeane sits in a chair and waits she sees that Katie has turned her back Jean gets up and runs to the garage she gets on the motorcycle and leave Katie runs out and screams �Don�t go� Jeane is on her way to Longview. Jeane thinks to herself �Please be okay Jeff�
Back at the fight
Faith makes her way to Jeff and feels his hand it is cold she thinks to herself �Oh my god Jeff is dead�
To be continued�.
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Sep 2001 Posts: 14903 Location: Wisconsin
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Tue Jan 29, 2002 2:14 pm |
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EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of the greatest stories so far Jeff...keep this up and you'll win my award next month too.
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Capt.Janeway17 Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 22 Jan 2002 Posts: 279 Location: USA
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Tue Jan 29, 2002 4:38 pm |
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Jeff died!
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me ke aloha
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Tue Jan 29, 2002 5:22 pm |
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Don't worry in the next few chapters he will return
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Capt.Janeway17 Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 22 Jan 2002 Posts: 279 Location: USA
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Tue Jan 29, 2002 5:24 pm |
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me ke aloha
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Galadriel Captain
Joined: 08 Sep 2001 Posts: 729
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Thu Jan 31, 2002 5:48 pm |
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I know he died, but he has a talent for coming back.
Thankfully.
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Wed Feb 06, 2002 12:31 pm |
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Chapter 7: The Death part 5
Faith holds Jeff�s hand and is in shock �What am I going to do?� the Master looks at her and says �Your going to die that�s what you are going to do.� Faith looks at Jeff she grabs his sword and runs at the Master throws her around Faith looks at Jeff all of a sudden a blue ball of energy goes to Jeff his eyes open up his eyes are red he stands up and looks at the Master and says in a odd voice �YOU ARE NOT WORTHY BEING HERE LEAVE NOW OR PAY THE PRICE.� The Master looks at Jeff and laughs Jeff runs at the Master and punches him sending him to the floor the Master looks at him �How can you do this is impossible I am the Master� The Master throws a punch at Jeff and Jeff catches his fist and squeezes his hand breaking every bone in his hand �Ahhh� Jeff looks at the Master. �You will never understand my power.� Jeff beats the crap out of the master breaking every bone he hits Jeff ends up breaking the neck of the Master. Jeff looks at the portal.
To Be Continued�
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Captain_Kathryn_Janeway Commodore
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 1460 Location: *~*Your Dreams*~*
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Wed Feb 06, 2002 1:54 pm |
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Scary Jeff!
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I'm not a tease; I'm just a reminder of what you can't have
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Thu Feb 07, 2002 2:43 pm |
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On 2002-02-06 12:54, Captain_Kathryn_Janeway wrote:
Scary Jeff!
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That is what I aim for dark, scary and semi adult
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Mon Feb 11, 2002 3:04 pm |
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Chapter 7: The Death part 6
Jeff is looking at the portal he looks at Faith and walks over to her �I have to go in the portal it will not close� All of a sudden Jean arrives on the motorcycle she sees Jeff and Faith. �What�s wrong?� Jeff looks at Jean than Katie arrives in a truck that Jeff was working on. �I�m sorry she wouldn�t stay at the base.� Jeff looks at Jean and Katie. �I have to leave you have to go on without me now.� Jeff looks at Faith �Take care of them you�re the protector now its all depends on you now.� Jeff walks over to Jean he takes off his coat. �Here you can have this now.� Jeff also hands Jean his sword. �Take good care of it.� Jeff smiles Jean looks at Jeff and starts to cry. �Please don�t go we need you.� Jeff looks at Jean and says. �I know why it is that you cry but I have to go.� Jeff turns around and walks into the portal as the portal closes Jeff screams it sounds like he is being torn apart the portal closes and the border is restored. Jane, Faith and Katie do not know what to do they stand there.
Meanwhile in the portal
Jeff screams �Ahhh� there are voices of Demons �Welcome to hell�
To Be Continued�
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Captain_Kathryn_Janeway Commodore
Joined: 07 Jan 2002 Posts: 1460 Location: *~*Your Dreams*~*
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Tue Feb 12, 2002 2:45 pm |
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*shudders*
Yikes!
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Tue Feb 12, 2002 2:56 pm |
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Makes you wonder how bad it is in hell Jeff is finding out first hand
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Galadriel Captain
Joined: 08 Sep 2001 Posts: 729
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Wed Feb 13, 2002 2:52 pm |
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Ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch!!!!!!!!!!! Ouch doesn't even begin to cover what he's feeling. YIKES!!!!!!!! Hurry up and continue!!!
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Sep 2001 Posts: 14903 Location: Wisconsin
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Thu Feb 14, 2002 1:23 pm |
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I agree Jeff, please continue.
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Fri Feb 15, 2002 12:26 pm |
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I will post the next chapter in the next few days
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Sep 2001 Posts: 14903 Location: Wisconsin
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Fri Feb 15, 2002 9:29 pm |
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Great, I'll read it right when you post it...unless I'm at school, then I'll read it when I get home.
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Mon Feb 25, 2002 7:55 pm |
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Chapter 8: A New Hunter is Born
Faith, Katie and Jean are still in the wear house the look at the dead demons and Jean asks, �What are we going to do?� Faith looks at Jean an replies �I don�t know but we have to go.� Jean picks up Jeff�s sword they leave Katie puts the motorcycle in the back of the truck Jean rides with faith they all get back to the base they are all quiet Jean runs to Jeff�s bed room and locks the door she starts to cry Katie comes up to the bedroom �Jean you ok?� Jean replies, �Leave me alone.� Jean continues to cry 3 days has passed and she finally comes out she comes down to the kitchen where Faith and Katie are eating Jean sits down they are all eating then the alarm goes off Faith checks the monitor in the kitchen �Something has breached the front door� they leave and head to the front door they see nothing Katie looks at Jean �Go to the office and lock the door� Jean looks at Katie and replies �no I don�t want to you can�t make me.� Than a voice comes from behind them �Hello� Faith draws her knife Katie grabs a bat and Jean pulls out Jeff�s sword Faith says. �Who are you?� the woman replies, �My name is Emma Frost I am with the council I am here to find the new hunter and I have found her.� Emma walks up to Jean �You�re the new hunter I see it in your eyes.� Jean looks at Emma and says �Lady your nuts.� I am no hunter the hunter died today.� Emma replies, �I know but when he died you were chosen as the next hunter you need to train your life will never be the same again.�
To Be Continued�.
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~Tony Montana wrote: | You know what you need people like me people for you to snub your nose at and point at saying there is a bad man. Well guess what This bad man is leaving. Say goodnight to the BAD MAN! |
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Link, the Hero of Time Vice Admiral
Joined: 15 Sep 2001 Posts: 5581 Location: Kokori Forest, Hyrule
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Sun Mar 03, 2002 10:16 pm |
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ouch... good
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Tue Mar 26, 2002 9:54 pm |
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Chapter 9: Fatal attractions
*Emma and Jean are in the gym Emma is teaching Jean how to fight with Jeff�s sword they practice for quiet awhile meanwhile Katie and Faith are in the kitchen eating lunch they are quiet all of a sudden there is a TV commercial*
�Today as of 3-26-02 omnicorp has officially opened up people are flowing in by the hundreds to get a job and here is the person responsible for creating omnicorp Mr. Scott Wesley� Katie looks up at the TV and sees the picture of Scott. �I know him he went to school with me and Jeff he was really quiet I didn�t know that he became a big success I got to go and talk to him I hope he remembers me� Faith looks at Katie and says. �You can�t meet him today we have to help Jean on the hunt this will be her first hunt she is leading and we found a nest of vampires� Katie looks at Faith and replies. �Me being there won�t hurt I need to talk to him and you can�t stop me� Katie gets up and leave she goes into the garage and gets into the truck and heads to Longview. Jean and Emma come into the kitchen Jean looks around and says. �Where is Katie?� Faith replies. �She went out and she won�t be back for awhile� it is now 8:00pm and Katie finally gets to the omnicorp building she looks up and sees that there are over 200 floors she thinks. �Boy this is a huge building.� Katie enters and goes into the elevator and goes to the 200th floor 15 minutes later she is there she knocks on the door and enters she sees Scott talking with a demon Katie looks at Scott and says. �Why are you talking to a demon?� Scott and the demon look at Katie Scott looks at Katie and tries to confuse her. �Katie oh my god I haven�t seen you in years how are you where have you been?� Katie looks at Scott and says again. �Why are you talking to that demon?� Katie pulls out a knife and runs at the demon the demon grabs Katie by the neck and breaks it he than throws her out a open window Katie falls 200 floors she hits the concrete Scott looks at the demon. �Good going.� The demon replies. �Thanks.� They both look out the window and see Katie�s lifeless body
To Be Continue�.
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shrek man Whiz Kid
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Wed Mar 27, 2002 12:40 am |
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That's good.
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Sat Mar 30, 2002 2:37 am |
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Chapter 10: The Gang
*It has been 24 hours since Katie was killed the police have taken the body and Jean, Faith and Emma have found out there is a major influx of Demonic activity since Katie was killed its becoming hard to fight all the demons for Faith, Emma, and Jean*
Emma screams. �JEAN LOOK OUT THE VAMPIRES ARE COMING OUT OF THEIR NEST.� Jean is fighting one of the vampires and Emma sees that Jean is about to be ambushed she runs and saves Jeans live but Emma dies in the process when the head Vampire bites her Faith looks at Jean. �We have to fall back we are losing this fight.� Jean looks at Faith. �We can�t leave Jeff wouldn�t leave.� Faith looks at Jean and replies. �We are not Jeff we don�t have his powers lets go.� Jean and Faith back off from the fight they make it back to the base and Faith screams. �Damn why couldn�t we kill them? It doesn�t make sense.� Both Faith and Jean take care at their injuries.
*Back at the Vampire nest*
�Did you see us beat them up not even the hunter could have stood up to us we are the best this is our night no one can stop us.� The leader vampire said all of a sudden the Demon that threw Katie out of the window appeared he goes to the leader and says. �Mr. Wesley is happy you did your job here are the drugs you need these drugs will help you go out into the sun and it will make you stronger.� The Demon leaves. The vampires take the Drug and all of a sudden they start to become more confidant they leave and start to tear up the city.
*Back at the base*
Jean and Faith are eating dinner when they get reports from the news saying that there are monsters attacking downtown Longview they get ready and leave.
To be continued�.
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
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Sun Mar 31, 2002 8:04 pm |
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MORE,MORE,MORE
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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Mon Apr 01, 2002 7:11 pm |
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Chapter 11: The Breach
*Jean and Faith are on their way to Longview to fight the Drugged up Vampires*
Faith is driving the car she looks at Jean and says. �You got the sword?� Jean pulls it out and replies. �Yeah they will not see what hits them.� Jean and Faith arrive at the site of the Vampire gang Jean gets out pulls out the sword and runs at the Vampires Faith pulls out a shotgun with silver bullets that can kill Vampires she shoots taking out 3 of them but they don�t die Faith looks at them and says. �Oh crap why didn�t they die? Jean falls back.� Jean is fighting the vampires and starts to fall back Scott and the Demon are watching the fight Scott looks at the Demon and says. �The fight is going good we will win and I will rule the planet.� As soon as Scott is done talking to the Demon there is a loud boom from the sky everyone looks up.
*Meanwhile in Hell*
Demon looks confused. �What�s going on?� the second Demon looks at him and says the portal is opening up.� The second Demon looks at him and says. �Why?� �I don�t know why.� Replies the first Demon all of a sudden there is a scream like someone or something is going through hell. �AHHHHHH I LIVE�
*Back on Earth*
All of a sudden some lighting flies from the portal and strikes the Vampire gang Scott and the Demon looks at each other. �What happened?� All of a sudden a bright blue light flies from the portal and streaks across the sky it goes so fast that it makes buildings shake OmniCorp shakes and sways both the Demon and Scott grab something there is a voice in the sky that comes from the ball of light. �IM ALIVE I LIVE� The ball of light streaks through the sky and crashes in a warehouse there is a loud explosion that can be heard from miles around Faith and Jean leave and head to where the explosion was as does the Demon and Scott.
To Be Continued�.
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Curtis Fleet Admiral
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Mon Apr 01, 2002 7:23 pm |
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!
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Galadriel Captain
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Mon Apr 01, 2002 8:35 pm |
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HE'SSSSS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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