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Leo Wyatt
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PostMon Jun 12, 2006 2:49 pm    Nick Stokes/Sara Sidle Romance Fanfiction

Chapter One of Nick/Sara Romance Rated not R but PG-13 (If it don't look PG-13 then you can pm me. This is first time writing a CSI Fanfiction.)






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The Flirtation


It was a rainy night and Sara was driving home but, she decided to stop at the store before she drove her dark and lonely apartment. As she her long and sexy legs stepped out of her car , she saw Nick pumping gas. Only Nick that would be crazy enough to pump gas in the rain. They each other eyes and said a nice hello. Then, Sara went into the store and head back to the drink freezer. As she was getting a drink, a man with a mask yelled for the cashier to give him the money.

Sara at first wasn't sure if she was going to go up front and help. But, she quickly grabbed her cell phone and called 911. She easily walked up to the front and tried to ease up on the masked robber. As she came up close, the masked robber grabbed her as Nick came in the door.

Nick was in shock and he went for his gun.



As Nick was reaching for his gun, the robber explained if he doesn't put down his gun, he will kill Sara. At that point Nick felt helpless and wanted so desperately to be the heroe. He gave a quick and thorough thought that if he distracts the robber, he can get a good shot.

'' Nick: Look buddy! You don't want to shoot the girl. Take me instead.''

The robber looked at him as if this guy was nuts but replied ,'' No!''
Nick started blabbling on about something else and then detective Brass came in through the back and yelled. The robber turned and Nick had a clear shot. He took that shot.

Sara was scared to death and Nick rushed to her. He grabbed her and held her. She smiled and said: '' You are feeling kinda heroic tonight. ''

Nick smiled and laughed. They stood up as Brass called in for an ambulance. Nick bought Sara her soda for her and walked her to her car.

He gently said goodnight and closed her car door.



Nick got into his car and turned on the radio. He then drives off and he drives home. He gets home and Grissom calls wanting him to come in. He thought he would at least get one nights rest


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PostSat Jun 17, 2006 5:21 am    

Nick started back to the lab after he got off with the bugman where he finds Sara standing outside mad as hell. He pulls in the parking lot and parks anxiously. Then he gets out of his SUV and goes to Sara to see what was wrong.

'' Nick:'' What's wrong?''

''Sara: '' What's wrong? What's wrong?''( She gasps for breath and clinches her fists.) Grissom is what's wrong! He gave me the night off because I got an atitude with Catherine.''

'' Nick:'' Sara! Sara! Just calm down! First of all, you need to cool your temper cause that temper can cause more trouble than you want it to.''

''Sara:'' Catherine demanded to be on the Abraham's case when I was the one processing and on the lead. Just because she knows the family, she gets special treatment cause she kisses Grissom's butt.''

'' Nick: Well Sweetpea, she'll screw up on the case cause she is close to the family. And when she does, you will have a chance at it.''

'' Sara:'' Did you just flirt with me?''

'' Nick: What makes you think that.''(Gives a sexy smirk.)

'' Sara: You just called me sweetpea.''

'' Nick:'' Oh! I did, Sorry.'' (Cracks a cute laugh )
Just chill out and just let it play out. Meantime you can help me with the Dodger's case.''

'' Sara: You want me bad!''

'' Nick: Now who's doing the flirting?''


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PostWed Jun 21, 2006 4:20 am    

I had to edit the whole thing cause I felt like the Grissom framed for murder wasn't good .

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PostWed Jun 21, 2006 3:33 pm    

I agree Deb and Grissom doesn't need to be workin on it. And Ecklie is a suspect. I was thinking get the day shift to investigate, but they would be not fair and they would be all for Ecklie . Ecklie is a suspect as well. Good! Let Grissom's team still investigate but not Griss. Grissom's team is more honest and fair. They are more thorough.

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PostWed Jul 05, 2006 5:49 am    

It is not about Grissom anymore ....Read now Charlie...



Nick and Sara got into Nick's SUV and drove off to the crime scene. On the way to the crime scene, Sara decided to ask Nick a question but didn't. She lost her nerve on that try. Nick all of sudden started singing to that country western music. Sara bursts into laughter. He is wondering what the devil is she laughing at. He asked her.

'' Nick: What are you laughing at sweetpea?''

'' Sara: You!''

'' Nick: Me?'' What's so funny about me?''

'' Sara: First of all , don't call me sweetpea.... It is your singing.''

'' Nick: My singing?'' I have a gorgeous voice.(Being sarcasticly funny.)

'' Sara: No you don't Nick.( She keeps on laughing as they drove on.)


Nick made a turn on Watts Street and at the fourth house on the sidewalk is the dead body of Mr. Dodger.

Nick pulled over and shut the SUV off. Nick and Sara both got out. They grabbed their cases. They went and examined the scene. Sara was bedzazzled by the man not wearing any clothes. Nick just wanted to look the other way. He didn't want to see a naked man's body on the side walk.

He is more of a ladies man even though he hasn't caught the right girl. But, he will soon in Sara.

'' Sara: So, blood force trauma to the head and his ___ is cut off.''

'' Nick: '' Damn! I definetly don't want to piss off no woman who would cut my _____ off.''

'' Sara: Or man.''(Sara laughs.)

'' Nick: Hey now ! Take that back.'''


They took pictures and collect evidence before David got the body.

'' David: Oh man! Is that his ____ laying over there on the ground?''


'' Nick: Hush David... Let's just not yell it out okay.''

'' Sara: Well everybody knows by now anyway. We probably have a whole neighborhood of suspects according to Brass. ''
The whole block is filled with single women and only one married couple.''

Nick:'' Ouch!!!'''


Nick and Sara finished collectin the evidence as they started to go door to door. Nick started flirting a little and Sara threathened to cut something off.


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PostWed Jul 05, 2006 5:52 am    

Nick just gave a shocking look at her and just smiled that sexy smile of his. Sara actually was having an fun and flirtation time with Nick. She thought to herself. '' I could actually be inlove with Nick. He's single, gorgeous, and he actually has emotions.''

She gave him a glare as they walked to one of the neighbor's door. As they got to the neighbor's door, she was already coming out of the door. Look as if she was going somewhere. She was a short latina woman with short hair. She looked surprised to see the two criminalist at her door step. She asked them: '' May I help you?''

'' Nick: Ma'am, do you know this man?''

Latina lady:'' Yes, I do. He is Mr. Dodger.'' Why?''

'' Sara: '' He was found murdered on the side walk in front of his house with his ____cut off. We are here to question the neighborhood.''

The Latina Lady: '' I don't know who did it.'' I didn't see anything at all.''

'' Sara:'' Are you sure?''

'' The Latina Lady:'' I am sure. Am I a suspect?''

'' Nick:'' We have to put everybody in this neighborhood as a suspect. As reported, there are single women who had affair with Mr. Dodger and he is married.'' Even his wife is a suspect.''

'' The Latina Lady: '' I honetly don't know.'' I don't see much of the Dodgers.''

'' Sara: '' Okay Ma'am. We will be back though.''


The latina lady walked off and got into her car. Nick and Sara started walking to the other houses.

They interviewed every single woman in that neighborhood. They was thinking maybe he was having an affair with a woman that he worked with. So, they decided to drive to his work place at the hospital. He was an administrator there.


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PostWed Jul 05, 2006 7:40 pm    

Hey hey hey! Pretty good stuff, there, Deb!
You even picked my favorite two characters.
The chemistry between them feels about right, and the storyline... is kinda funny, lol.
It's a good story, and I like the whole Catherine and Sara having a spat thing. It is way to true. You'd almost swear Grissom had a thing for catherine by the special treatment she gets...
...anyways...
Keep up the good work <3!


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PostWed Jul 05, 2006 7:54 pm    

(Thank you)


Grissom called while Nick and Sara was on their way to the hospital. Sara suddenly got very angry. She didn't want to hear his name. Nick started thinking that Sara may not be over him, but the way she was acting, he knew that she was. She still had some feelings for him but not enough to keep the flame for him going. Nick was determined to win Sara's heart in some way shape or form.

'' Nick:'' Yeah Gris!''

'' Grissom:'' What have you and Sara got?''

'' Nick: Nothing from the neighborhood single ladies that for sure.''

'' Grissom:'' So, what did you get?''

'' Nick:'' Mr. Doger may have been having an affair with another woman at his work place at the hospital. We are headed to the hospital now.''


'' Grissom:'' Ok, good!. But, try to hurry up with the case along. We need you back here at the lab. Ecklie has gathered up an meeting of some kind.''

'' Nick:'' We'll try.''


As Nick hung up the cell phone, Sara gave him a nasty look.

'' Nick'' What was that look for?''

'' Sara:'' Let me guess, Catherine cracked the case.''

'' Nick:'' Now!!! Ecklie has gathered up a meeting of some kind and Grissom wants us to try to finish up the case.''

''' Sara:'' Oh, right.''


Nick and Sara got to the hospital and his cell phone rung again. This time it was Ecklie. Nick wasn't too please by the look on his face.''

'' Nick:'' Hello!''

'' Ecklie:'' You and Sara get back to the lab.

'' Nick:'' Do what?'' We haven't even finished the case.!!!!''

'' Ecklie:'' so, I will have the day shift finish but right now this is important.''


'' Nick:'' We're on out way.''

Nick slammed his cell phone down.''

'' Sara:'' What now darling?''

'' Nick:'' We have to go to the lab now as Ecklie has ordered.''

'' Sara:'' But, Gris said after the case.'' Ecklie is going to give this case to the day shift.''

'' Nick:'' Yep''. Hey did you just call me darling?'' honeyQ''

'' Sara:{ laughs and acts like she don't know what he is talking about.) '' Who me?'' I wouldn't do that.'' I don't know what you're talking about.''

'' Nick:'' uh huh oh!... If you say so.''

They kept having a slight flirtatious spat back to the lab.


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PostWed Jul 05, 2006 7:56 pm    

B]Chapter Two


The Flirtation Becomes Into Love .


Nick and Sara arrived back at the Crime Lab . They got out of the SUV and went inside. They walked down the long hallway of CSI, spatting at each other as if they was falling inlove for the first time without realizing it first. The team was starting to find out and Grissom puzzled by it. He knew he lost his chances. Nick and Sara walked in the conference room smirking at each other and joking around. Ecklie seemed very bother by it cause he has no sense of humor.


'' Sara: '' So, why are you calling this conference Ecklie?'' That you had to take us off our case and replace us with the day shift?''

'' Ecklie:'' First of all, don't get an atitude or I will send you out that door.''
I brought the team together because the Mayor has been murdered and it is our top priority to find out who, when, how, and why. The media is going to be all over this case. So, I suggest you guys do your jobs thoroughly.''

'' Grissom: Any leads?''

'' Ecklie: '' No, that's why I called the meeting.''' The Governor is going to be looking over our shoulders.''


Nick and Sara was off in space playing around. More like whispering in each other's ears betting that Grissom will beat Ecklie at this case.
Ecklie couldn't take the smirkering between them.

Ecklie:'' Is there anything wrong Sara and Nick that you would like to share with us?''

'' Nick:'' No, not really.''' It is funny on how you would like to pull us together again since you were the one who split the team up. And you didn't do much help in helping the team rescue me.''

'' Ecklie:'' This is not up for debate Nick. We are going to crack this case. So you all go out and get who ever who did this.''


The team got up and look at each other. Catherine was wondering what was going on between Sara and Nick.


( I will continue later.)


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PostThu Jul 06, 2006 8:00 pm    

Deb,

This fanfiction is much better than the Grissom was framed for murder. Keep up the good work.


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