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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:58 pm End Of Times Or Is I am Loosin My Mind |
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Once upon a time not so long ago, in a land not so far away. Right and wrong were not quite so hard to know and black and white was not so gray. Times has changed and now it seems- Conceince has gone away of the human race. Earth has came to such evil and violence that no one cares about anyone anymore. But, there was a band of rebels raiding through out the big city of Earth.
It seems that there is only one person that knows what is going on in this chaotic world. Her name was Kayla Ruiz. She was recently locked up in an asylum cause she lost her mind it seems. She kept ramblin on about the end of times is near, so her mother had her committed.
Kayla knew she wasn't loosing her mind. The media was every where asking questions about Kayla and doing news reports on her. She grew angry and started throwing chairs around. The male orderly had to give her something to calm down. As the male orderly put her in a closed in room, she started ramblin on how this Luicmano was brain washing everybody to believe that it is not the end of the world. Lucimano made everyone on Earth believe that he was a God.
People believed him and they took the mark of 666 on the hands. Anyone who don't have the mark would be hunted down and killed . Kayla tried to warn the good people of Earth of all what was to happen but noone would listen and that is what brought her into this asylum.
More to come....
Last edited by Leo Wyatt on Mon Feb 06, 2006 5:50 am; edited 2 times in total
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Fri Dec 30, 2005 8:06 pm |
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Millions of people have turned to the darkness and making sure the christians are condemned if they are caught praying. There was a group of Raiders that noone knew about called the Raiders of Mercy. They never took the mark of the beast. They was out to stop this Lucimano guy from this evil he was doing. But, they had to get fake mark of the beast to get their plan into action.
The leader of The Raiders Of Mercy was a man called Jeremy Hope. He wasn't sure if there was a God. All he wanted to do was get the freedom back. People was being killed if they didn't take the mark. He wanted this to end. Little did he know he would end up meeting Kayla soon.
The Raiders of Mercy knew a clinic doctor that gives out fake marks and they headed there...
Meanwhile back at the asylum, Kayla had a plan on getting out of there. When the male orderly come to get her, she is going to find some way to knock him out.
When he came in, he had a needle, as a result, Kayla grabbed it from him and stuck him with it. He went out and she took his clothes. She even took his name tag and card to get out of that place.
(Continue later on.)
Last edited by Leo Wyatt on Mon Feb 06, 2006 5:58 am; edited 1 time in total
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Wed Jan 04, 2006 7:36 pm |
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Does this suck or what? I need new ideas. So bare with me in the next few days.... I get it going soon.
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Mrs. Vulcan Lieutenant
Joined: 28 Dec 2005 Posts: 174 Location: South Yorkshire England
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Wed Jan 04, 2006 7:52 pm |
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I'll be waiting!!!
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Life may not be the party we imagined it to be, but while we're here we may as well dance!
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charlie American Soldier
Joined: 26 Feb 2004 Posts: 598 Location: In The United States
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:01 am |
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When are you starting back on it?
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Sun Jan 08, 2006 9:32 am |
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When I have more time .
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 2:26 pm |
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I am going to start on this in the next few weeks... I got two projects I am working on. One I really want to do first before this. I am writing the ideas down before I post the story. I don't want to mess it up.
I am wondering do away with this just edit it. Rename it and start all over with my new idea so I won't have to make another topic? Cause one I am working on is better. It is not boring like this one. Any opinions?
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Mon Feb 06, 2006 5:59 am |
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I rename my story and started over. I need some ideas. Anyone care to help?
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Leo Wyatt Sweetest Angel
Joined: 25 Feb 2004 Posts: 19045 Location: Investigating A Crime Scene. What did Quark do this time?
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Mon Mar 06, 2006 5:34 am |
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Lock please. Another failed story. I am working on a better one but i won't post it til I am fully done this time so it is not boring. I want it perfect so please lock this one..
Thank you ,
Deb
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