A Place In This World

[Leo Wyatt]

A young woman's goal in life is to find a place in this world to fit in. She wants to be one of the cool people that she knows. She is just one of the uncool outcast that only a few talk to her and be friends with her.
It is a lonely place for her and she longs so much for friendship with the cool people.


This young woman by the name of Dinah Hines often went online and search for friends on yahoo messenger. She finds some, but it is not enough for her. She joins some message boards to try to find friends. She does but, she often makes mistakes that she regrets. Some of her mistakes are usually big.


She lost alot of friends and lost respect of those who try to help her. She regrets the way her life leads her. She even hurt one friend. She apologized. But, she can not forgive herself for the bad things that had happened. She wish she could go back time and fixed things. But, she knows it is not possible.

She has to move on but, she is finding that so differcult. She is depressed and she does not feel like talking much on msn messenger or yahoo. She is afraid to screw up again. She must find away to prove to the cool people that she can change her life around.

Will they accept her? Only God only knows if they do. She longs for friendship. A friendship that is everlasting. Can she find that place in this world for her? Only time will tell or not. How many mistakes does she have to make before she will finally learn?

This is the life of mine. I long desperately for my place in this world. Welcome to my world.

( Reason I edit my name out, because I want this to be different.)

[Leo Wyatt]

Second Part of A Place in this world


She learns a very important lesson on the mistakes that she made. She learned to stop repeating them cause sooner or later, she will loose all respect.


She needs to know there is someone out there that cares for her. Someone to take her by the hand and guide her. To love her and to teach her of her ways.


Does she ever get that special friend? Only time will tell and time will heal those old wounds of hers. She learned if she does not have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all. Treat others as if you want them to treat you. Be honest, loyal, and most of all, don't be no hypercrite.

She sits in the dark in her room listening to sad and lonely music. Her life seems empty. How does she deals? God only knows that answer.
She longs for redemption as if it was going to come to her.

The fan is blowing cold air in her pale white face as she types. She thinks back to the time when she was good and innocent. She was almost an angel. Something got a hold to this sweet angel and turned her into the bitter angry young woman.

She often thinks if she had not have messed up, things would have been better for her. Her life is like a living hell almost everyday. Her mom is visiting and that is driving her crazy.

She wonders what will tomrrow brings. Well let's see. Stay tune in for tomrrow.

[Leo Wyatt]

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