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Tomb Raider Freak
Ensign
Joined: 26 Sep 2001
Posts: 52
Location: I am from the Polar Ice Caps.
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 Wed Oct 17, 2001 5:40 am |
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Hay people heres the firs copy and if you like it, post something, if you dont, tell me what I did wronge. thanks! 
"Calling all raiders"
part 1
Lara Croft tossed and turned in her bed trying to get to sleep but she did not have any luck. even the wonderfull smell of the fresh flowers outside did not help. So she put on her robe and walked down her stairs in her huge house.
Lara went into her living room and turned on her never used T.V. and she fliped the channels, but she stoped when she saw MS. Natlin, an old friend. She was talking about this atrifect that should be worth millions or even billions, she wants anyone who can find it and she was going to give then about 4 billion dollars. "I thank I would be up to the challange" Says Lara. "hmmmm, Frances!!!"
After her call for her butler, he walkes down the stairs with some coffee in his hands. "Yes MS.Croft"
"I thank we better be getting my guns ready cuz im going on a mystry adventure"
was that good?
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Hello, My name ia Lara Croft, I am a specialish in Engneering.
I am ranked highest from Admiral Paris.
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Leiutenant-Sones
Admiral
Joined: 12 Aug 2001
Posts: 7765
Location: Behind You....
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brillent 
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tom-paris-voyager
No.1 Turk
Joined: 17 Aug 2001
Posts: 4381
Location: U.S.S Skyline-A
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| Wed Oct 17, 2001 12:55 pm |
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short and sweet just like sones! 
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Link, the Hero of Time
Vice Admiral
Joined: 15 Sep 2001
Posts: 5581
Location: Kokori Forest, Hyrule
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| Thu Oct 18, 2001 2:33 pm |
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it's really good
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"Dissent is the highest form of patriotism." President Thomas Jefferson
"A man's respect for law and order exists in precise relationship to the size of his paycheck." Adam Clayton Powell Jr.
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Kat Moore
Rear Admiral
Joined: 31 Aug 2001
Posts: 3241
Location: 6 feet under.
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| Sun Oct 21, 2001 3:26 pm |
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good
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Death is lifes way of saying "your fired"
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slim shady
Sophomore Cadet
Joined: 20 Oct 2001
Posts: 11
Location: North Carolina
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| Mon Oct 22, 2001 3:09 pm |
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yeaaaaaaaa go girl!!!! lol
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im slim shady, yes im the real shady, all you ther slim shadys are just inmatation, so wont the real slim shady please s
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Tomb Raider Freak
Ensign
Joined: 26 Sep 2001
Posts: 52
Location: I am from the Polar Ice Caps.
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| Fri Oct 26, 2001 4:44 pm |
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Guess what, im posting the other part to it right now, tell me again if its good and if its bad.
"Calling all raiders"
As soon as Lara got dressed she grabed her Uzies. Pistals, Shotgun, and her magums and got on her new motorcycle and flew acrost the street, dodging all the cars in her way. As she drove she notosed it was darker than before, pretty dark for 6:00 AM. When she got to her desnagtion she jumped of her bike and locked it to the poll puting a sircurty lock on it. When she was in the very cold building that Ms. Natlin said to go to sh saw many people, most of them men, then she saw Natlin. She aproched her in a slow motion, and she said..........
Sorry I am out of time!!
ya like that!
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Hello, My name ia Lara Croft, I am a specialish in Engneering.
I am ranked highest from Admiral Paris.
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Link, the Hero of Time
Vice Admiral
Joined: 15 Sep 2001
Posts: 5581
Location: Kokori Forest, Hyrule
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| Fri Oct 26, 2001 6:37 pm |
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so far it's cool.. just add a bit here and there
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"Dissent is the highest form of patriotism." President Thomas Jefferson
"A man's respect for law and order exists in precise relationship to the size of his paycheck." Adam Clayton Powell Jr.
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1 OF 1
Ambassador
Joined: 13 Jul 2001
Posts: 2518
Location: The Federation of Planets
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| Sun Oct 28, 2001 2:03 pm |
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Tomb Raider Rocks!!! Good story. 
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Transwarp13
Fleet Admiral
Joined: 20 Jun 2001
Posts: 14350
Location: Docked at DS9
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| Mon Oct 29, 2001 10:57 am |
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yah, this should be in fan fic....
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Kat Moore
Rear Admiral
Joined: 31 Aug 2001
Posts: 3241
Location: 6 feet under.
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| Mon Nov 12, 2001 6:48 am |
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I know but the mod put it in here because Tomb Raider is fictional, I dont know why, there is a real Lara Croft
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The Delta Flyer
Commodore
Joined: 08 Apr 2002
Posts: 2163
Location: East Yorkshire
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| Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:12 pm |
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Cool
Isn't there an official Tomb Raider book out now? A stand alone novel about the size of a Trek one..."Amulet of Power" I think it's called...
Sorry, mumbling away to self there.
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Monkey
Captain
Joined: 05 Feb 2004
Posts: 833
Location: On a quest you probably wouldn't believe.
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| Wed Mar 31, 2004 7:56 am |
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tis better then i can do
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