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KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 07 Oct 2006 Posts: 251 Location: BC
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Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:04 am Unexpected Blessings |
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StarfleetCommand74656 Captain
Joined: 22 May 2006 Posts: 653 Location: On STV
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Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:07 pm |
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I keep trying to read it, it says i have to login?
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KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
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Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:42 pm |
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sorry about that. try this link http://www.fanfiction.net/l/17/3/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/
otherwise you can look up by author. search for CanadianReba.
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StarfleetCommand74656 Captain
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Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:59 pm |
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It's a great plot, and well-written. The punctuation (or lack of same) lets it down in places, though.
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KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 07 Oct 2006 Posts: 251 Location: BC
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:34 pm |
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StarfleetCommand74656 wrote: | It's a great plot, and well-written. The punctuation (or lack of same) lets it down in places, though. |
Thank you for the comment. I admit i never have been very good at the grammar part. I usually go with the Word grammar check suggestions when it comes to punctuation.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:23 pm |
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What I read is good so far. I put in my fun favorite places so I can go back to it whenever I get the chance to finish reading it.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:14 pm |
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Update.
I finished reading it. It's really good.
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KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
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Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:16 am |
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Josi Rockholt wrote: | Update.
I finished reading it. It's really good. |
That's actually the whole story, i don't have anymore for that one. I am planning on doing a Sequel to "Second Chances" that starts from when Janeway and crew get back to earth and how they have to deal with all the changes.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
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Mon Jan 29, 2007 4:48 pm |
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Sounds like a good plan.
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KateReba fan Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 07 Oct 2006 Posts: 251 Location: BC
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Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:38 am |
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I rewrote the final chapter since it seemed too rushed. Let me know what you think.
http://www.fanfiction.net/l/17/3/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/
otherwise you can look up by author. search for CanadianReba.
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