B-Day Card

[Captain Patrick]

Hi everybody...

My girlfreinds brithday is coming up on the 13th and i wrote something for a card i am designing and i want to know what you all think about it:

Front Cover:

For my Girl Friend,

Words alone
can not express
just how special
you are.

Inside Text:

Knowing you is the nicest thing
that ever happened to me...
Knowing you has made the world
a happy place to be...

Happy BirthDay
To a Wonderful Freind

Pen Added Text:

Every time i see
you it brighten's my
day, so i want to wish
you a happy
birthday and
here's to many more.
Love Patrick...

Added Second Page:

I want to wish
you a happy
Birthday from the
deepest area of my heart. I
know this is not much and if i could
i would get you a
laptop, but my fund's are limited at the moment,
So i hope that you accept this
small token of my Affection(The Card) and Care(The Inclosed Money) for you.

Patrick

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The () area's are not on the card i just added that to help get my point threw. She will get what it all means, the reason i want to buy her a laptop is cause she is not all that well off and can't afford one so i let her use mine when i can, and i truly do want to get her one but like i said... So what does all of you think of it?