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Captain Patrick
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PostTue Apr 04, 2006 10:25 pm    Life and Fate - A Poem

Life and Fate:

I look a far,
to see the star.
The star of my life.
That is full of grief and strife.

What to do.
Where to go.
With the damn life of mine.
I see my time line.

As I search my heart for answers,
answers to questions that hamper
My sprit and my soul,
that lays in the dark.
Away from the hole
that is in my heart.

What sin did I commit.
To cause this pain.
That makes a comet,
Fueled by anger and hate.
That leads me to my ultimate fate.

Death is the ultimate fate.
A fate in which its coming it can be late.
Or it could come bringing me to an early demise.

*NOTE: This was in no way writen by me, it was writen by my most best freind and soul mate, i ask her if i could put it up here since it is really good. If you liked it please post a comment so i can send it to her she wants feedback on it.


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PostWed Apr 05, 2006 3:50 am    

It's very moving.

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Captain Patrick
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PostThu Apr 06, 2006 3:15 pm    

She says thanks seven of nine, and a few words in it were mispelled in it so now it might make a bit more sense.

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