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Seven of Nine
Sammie's Mammy
Joined: 16 Jun 2001
Posts: 7871
Location: North East England
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 Sun Jun 05, 2005 8:42 am My Life |
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My Life by Danni Matzk
Up
Down
Up
Down
My life.
Rollercoaster
Never ending
Never stopping
Pause.
Silence
Hearing the birds
Hearing the trees
Peace.
Doesn't last
Heart racing
Can't think
Blackness.
Peace.
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madlilnerd
Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004
Posts: 5885
Location: Slough, England
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| Sun Jun 05, 2005 9:03 am |
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So accurate, so darn accurate 
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zero
Rear Admiral
Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Posts: 4566
Location: Texas
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| Fri Jun 10, 2005 5:45 pm |
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I love it.
It says so much in so little words.
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Seven of Nine
Sammie's Mammy
Joined: 16 Jun 2001
Posts: 7871
Location: North East England
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| Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:10 am |
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Thanks  I was in reality describing the side effects of the medication I'm on... they put me to sleep, but they also make me really anxious and send my heart racing. Not pleasant.
I might post some more later.
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The_Doctor
Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 25 Feb 2003
Posts: 339
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| Thu Jun 30, 2005 12:14 am cool |
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Cool, I love descriptive poetry like that, I work on the Lit mag in my school, and those poems are always nice to see. Keep writing
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