Renegade

3 of 7 · **Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:25 am Renegade**

This is my first Fanfic that I'm posting on the web, I'm not quite finished with it yet, so it will be posted in pieces. Here's the story:

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The sun was shining through the trees of the forrest. It's rays revealed a wreck of a once powerful starship on the ground.
First it wasn't any signs of any survivers, but suddenly there was a movement.
It was a woman, and she was trying to build a beacon to call for reinforcements from her own kind. Her servo-arm moved over the controls.

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Well, that's the beginning. What do you think of it?

lionhead · **Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:32 am**

Sounds great, it definitly got my attention.

3 of 7 · **Mon Jan 10, 2005 10:11 am**

Ok, here's the continuing:

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It was almost fininshed, just needed a little bit more working.
Then she heard something in the bushes. She wanted to stay to finish the beacon, but also thought she needed to check out who it was. So she walked to some trees nearby to see better.

"They said it would be around here."
It was three Starfleet officers; she could see them.
"Did they also saw what kind of ship it was, lt. McCoy?" Asked one of them.
"No, just that it was a ship which was in trouble."
The three Starfleet officers were lt. James McCoy, ensign Harry Fiddis and lt. commander Andrew Connery.

Then they rounded the corner, they could see the ship.
"Jikes, it's a Borg Cube!!! Or what's left of it, anyway... I really hope there isn't any survivors." Said ensign Fiddis.

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Okey, I'm still working on how this should continue, so this is all I put here for now. But I will post more as soon as I have more to the story.

Voy_Girl · **Fri Jan 28, 2005 3:37 pm**

I'll sticky this for a while. I think you should try to add a bit longer chapters, though, so that people really can get into the story.

Curtis · **Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:56 pm**

Micteth-Son of Udas · **Wed Feb 09, 2005 1:52 pm**

Captain McKinnon · **Sat Feb 19, 2005 6:33 pm**

I kinda hate borg

missl · Captain Joined: 18 Feb 2005 Posts: 675

i honastly think that u hav done a gr8 job at it wen dose the book come out to australia

i would read that book ova and ova again

Lord Borg · **Sun Feb 20, 2005 2:56 pm**

very cool

lionhead · **Thu Feb 24, 2005 9:50 am**