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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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 Sun Jan 16, 2005 2:26 pm Without You. (Poem) |
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Without you
By: Andrew J. Bullock
Without you my world would shatter down
Without you the world would cry to the ground
Without you I would have no joy
Without you I would never see the light
Without you, Without you
Without you I would not be alive
Without you I would not survive
Without you the world is gray and dark
Without you the winds are so sharp
Without you, Without you
Comments are apreciated, but not required. 
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Starbuck
faster...
Joined: 19 Feb 2003
Posts: 8715
Location: between chaos and melody
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| Sun Jan 16, 2005 5:13 pm |
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Its nice. It seems a little hurried, but its nice.
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Fri Jan 21, 2005 4:59 pm |
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I see what you mean. I'll try and work on it. 
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Wed May 04, 2005 5:38 am |
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Well I decided to dig this back up from the 'dead' 
Guess it's the right time to.
God bless,
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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nadia
cookie
Joined: 08 Apr 2005
Posts: 8560
Location: Australia
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| Wed May 04, 2005 6:43 am |
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w  w it's realy good!
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Lord Borg
Fleet Admiral
Joined: 27 May 2003
Posts: 11214
Location: Vulcan Capital City, Vulcan
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| Sat May 07, 2005 11:40 pm |
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Nice andrew, very nice, keep up the good work
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AndrewBullock
The Misguided One
Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Posts: 2112
Location: Kentucky. (North America)
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| Sat May 07, 2005 11:42 pm |
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I don't think it's 'that' great. Just something I thought off the top of my head like the others. Thank you guys so much!
~Andrew
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"Our integrity sells for so little, but it is all we really have. It is the very last inch of us. But within that inch we are free"
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madlilnerd
Duchess of Dancemat
Joined: 03 Aug 2004
Posts: 5885
Location: Slough, England
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| Sun May 08, 2005 2:34 am |
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It's full of passion and emotion. Read my poems and tell me what you think.
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