Lost Love. (Poem)

[AndrewBullock]

The first day I met you was a joy to my heart
Even though we didn�t get off to a very good start
I discovered more about you�re beauty
Then became attracted to you the cuttey.
You have taught me many new things
Even the ability to unjust dreams
I asked if you felt the same way
And found my dreams tearing away
Someone else occupied your heart
So I had to remove you from my charts
We are still great friends
Which is something I could never ask to take away
For now I find my self in love with another
But don�t fret, for you will always be in my heart, mind and dreams


Much love,
~Andrew

[Starbuck]

again, its a nice poem, but it sounds rushed, and that there's a lot left out.