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Deciviel
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PostThu May 06, 2004 1:27 pm    Judgement

The hammer of judgement rises
Like the moon, but it despises
The dawn of the rising flesh.

The evidence that surmises
The innocence that arises
Is a dyeing dog put to rest.

The dismission of the sanctity
Of god's protection aimlessly
Devours the souls of the populous.

The devil's heart fuels angrily
The wrath of the dark entities
That rape the peace of all of us.

The world is wrought with blasphemy
And thrusted into anarchy
As the burning fire sears our souls.

The murderous ones blatantly
Gouge the eyes of those that see
As the fading ray of hope takes its toll.

The dark one that grips us
In a stranglehold so vicious
Echoes relentless laughter in our ears.

The due of all our slip-ups
Is finally meeting with us
As we witness the death of our years.



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belanna_rules210
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PostSun Sep 19, 2004 3:14 pm    

Wow! You're pretty good, y don't people add to ur poems?

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Creeper the sneaker
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PostWed Sep 22, 2004 3:43 pm    

Very Very Very good

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PostWed Sep 22, 2004 3:52 pm    

yes, thats pretty good i must say.


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