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Paul Marshall
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Joined: 30 Aug 2002
Posts: 2976
Location: Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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 Tue Jan 27, 2004 10:20 am Poems by Paul Marshall |
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My Mind...
Red balls bounce by with no emotion...
blue stars spark off my feet as I walk...
the walls are white and wavy;
I think I can almost swim.
As I walk...I see yellow monkeys
eating brown bananas with no peel...
in my house...my dog chases the fish
on the ceiling while I eat my bowl of wood nuggets.
At school...the teachers walk on the walls
and talk backwards...but my feet hurt...
my ears keep running away from me...
but I catch them...my feet are clear.
Paul Marshall Isaacs
Copyright �2004 Paul Marshall Isaacs
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Wed Jan 28, 2004 12:56 pm |
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Nice, 
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Paul Marshall
Rear Admiral
Joined: 30 Aug 2002
Posts: 2976
Location: Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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| Wed Jan 28, 2004 1:22 pm |
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Thank you very much
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Ronevick
The King
Joined: 23 May 2003
Posts: 11428
Location: (609), New Jersey
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| Wed Jan 28, 2004 4:42 pm |
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Interesting....lol. Sounds kinda like an abstract paintin'. 
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Paul Marshall
Rear Admiral
Joined: 30 Aug 2002
Posts: 2976
Location: Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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| Wed Jan 28, 2004 9:00 pm |
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I tried to make it really trippy.
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T. Dean
Captain
Joined: 16 Dec 2003
Posts: 715
Location: Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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| Fri Jan 30, 2004 8:55 am |
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I really like it.
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Kyle Reese
Cadet Gunnery Sergeant
Joined: 21 Apr 2003
Posts: 5672
Location: The United States of America
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| Wed Feb 04, 2004 12:46 am |
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Wow, did you think up those yourself? How long did it take? I can't write stories or poems
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