"Times up"

Starbuck · **Sun Oct 05, 2003 7:10 pm "Times up"**

This is my new fan fic. I appreciate the critisizm even if it isn't constructive.

"Time's up." Mr. Slovitch said as I finished my math quiz. "I can't believe this is High School math!" said Lauren chapple, the priciples daughter. "I know," begaun her best friend Sara Robertson, "Anyone who doesn't get it should go back to 7th grade." They always said this because they know I don't get it. 'Welcome to high school,' I thought a I handed in my paper, sure I was going to fail.

CaptJD · Disyple Joined: 16 Sep 2003 Posts: 2699 Location: Canada!

^ Interesting.

Voy_Girl · **Mon Oct 06, 2003 8:33 am**

Yes, it is.

Melodramatic · Rear Admiral Joined: 04 Feb 2003 Posts: 4577

Short but I agree.
It is interesting.
You should continue if you can.

Starbuck · **Mon Oct 06, 2003 4:15 pm**

"Times up." said Mrs. Cramer as I handed in my english test, sure that I would do really well. Sara was in my class. She didn't understand english. "If anyone doesn't understand this simple stuff," I begaun to my boyfriend chase, "they must be retarded." Sara heard me. I think it must have hurt her feelings because as I walked out of the class room, she was in tears.

sabertooth1217 · **Mon Oct 06, 2003 5:44 pm**

short and sweet

Voy_Girl · **Tue Oct 07, 2003 12:37 pm**

What a twist!

sabertooth1217 · **Wed Oct 08, 2003 5:23 pm**

this may be one of the shorest fan fic ive seen

Voy_Girl · **Thu Oct 09, 2003 1:26 pm**

sabertooth1217 · **Thu Oct 09, 2003 4:42 pm**

o yeah its not fan fic cuz its not based on any shows duh lol