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Mark Mag Gloade
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PostFri Sep 26, 2003 7:06 pm    Speed of Light

This is soon to be a fan fiction story(after i get startrek:11 done)and here is the story...
4 teenagers go to an airshow and demolish the best pilots in the world, their skills are wanted by nasa for something, but a advancement in technolgy means a loss of life...



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PostSat Sep 27, 2003 10:20 am    

Well, I cant wait
You are a very good story writter.


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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 7:22 am    

anyone here

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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 7:23 am    

i am so confused[/img]

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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 12:49 pm    

dogig wrote:
i am so confused[/img]


This is the Fanfiction section, thus you can comment on the story...


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Mark Mag Gloade
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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 6:03 pm    

It was raining out...
Mark had woke up and looked out the window and muttered
"Im gonna get soacked before I even get to the bus stop" he got out of bed and got ready for school.After he had got out of the shower his mom yelled up at him " Mark schools been cancled "
He was ready to curse, he got out of bed and got ready for nothing he went to his room and got on the laptop sitting on his cluttered desk and waited for his parents to go to work before logging on to the internet.
Mark put in his favorte game, Combat Flight Simulator. He logged in as Commander Maga and waited in the chat room, ignoreing the arogent idiots who said that his squad was gonna get killed.
After about 5 min of waiting his squad mates entered there was Strawberry Blondie, Wolf Man and Tammi Boy.
Strawberry Blondie was Marks friend Vikki Locke, Tammi Boy was his friend Allen Martin and Wolf Man is Marks friend Johnny Wolf.
"Hey Allen, Vikki and Jonny" typed Mark
"Hey, sup we still on for the squad fight with the Quantums?" typed Allen
"Yes we are Allen, they are here!" typed Vikki
"Then lets get going!" typed Jonny
"Allright, Good Luck Quantums" typed Mark
Marks computer screen displayed the word Loading with a moving red line under it, it would take a moment to load. The screen changed, it desplayed a F-14's HUD
"Rogue wing, requesting take-off clearence" Mark said into his mike
"Granted" Replyed whoever was watching the game
"Allright kids heres the rules, we flank 2 of them then move on to the others, if you take damage bug out" Mark Said over his mike
"Let the party begin!" replyed Vikki


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PostMon Sep 29, 2003 6:10 pm    

Great story!

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PostSun Oct 05, 2003 5:34 pm    

The kids kept the com silence, so they wont berak their team mates concertration.They knew it was only a game but they were bored silly...
They knew the manivor, flank them from behind.Mark and Allen would distract the fightes while Vikki and Jonny went down the left side pulled up vertically and dive down and fire on their left or right side...
The manivor worked but at the loss of Allen. Mark still posed a distraction for the 3 remaining fighters but Vikki and Jonny knew that if they did not get rid of 2 of the fighters they would not stand a chance. So they took a risk and went after the learder and trailer, this proved fatel for Jonny.Vikki and Mark were the only 2 left. It was fair now 2 versus 2, Mark had one manivor left and Vikki wasnt Expecting him to...


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PostMon Oct 06, 2003 3:05 pm    

...GO KAKAMAZIE?!?!?!

"YEHAW!" Mark yelled with excitement over his mike
"Mark, your insane" Mark herd Vikkis voice over her mike
The plan worked, Mark Vaporized the 2 remaining fighters
After the game the 4 of them parted ways and found other things to do on that rainy day...
The next day at school the four of them met before classes stared
"YES, I have been waiting for this all week" Mark said with excitement
"Ya, the airshow sould be intersting..."Began Vikki"...And there will be the military combat training simulators there,I cant wait"
"Well, the bus is here, we had better head to our classes"Said Allen
"Cya on the bus kids"Mark said as he ran upstaris to his class
"Mr.Gloade, late as usual"Began Marks Science teacher"Lets get on teh bus shall we?"
"Yes SIR" Mark replyed jokingly
When the four of the mhad gotten on the bus they were sitting beside eachother...
"EEEW, I gotta sit with Vikki"Mark said jokingly
"Shutup Mark!"Retaliated Vikki
"Ok, lets be quite now, we dont want them to cancle it do we?"Inquired Allen
"Ya, lets be quiter" Said Johnny
After 2 hours on the bus the children ran out, all of the class except 4 shady characters went to see the jet fighters, the 4 remaining children went straight for the combat simulators...


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PostMon Oct 06, 2003 3:37 pm    

Lol, very good.
I find it quite funy


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PostTue Oct 07, 2003 4:05 pm    

Our 4 heros(well soon to be anywayz)head twards the simulators...
"Hey do you kids wanna take on the 4 best pilots on the planet?"Inquired the programmer
"sure, we can take them down"Mark said jokingly
"Well im in if you are in Mark, this is gonna be intersing"Johnny replyed
"He you guys gonna party without me ?!?!?!"Demanded Allen
"And Vikki will follow the guy she likes in eh Allen"Mark asks
"No, that would be you Mark" Allen replyed
"SHUTUP!"Yelled Vikki and she then kicked Mark and Allen in the groin, she went into a simulator, her face as red as a apple...
"Och, im never gonna be a father now"Allen Said
"Dont worry, I dont think anyone would want little Allens or Marks running around"Mark replyed
"ok guys, lets fly!"Jonny said
Then 3 guys got into their simulators and put on the head sets Vikki began taunting them...
"Mark and Krystal in a Tree K.I.S.S.I.N-"Vikki taunted
"Ok Vikkitoria, im sorry"Mark Said
"Quit calling me that"Vikki said
"Ya quiute callling her that"Jonny Said Jockingly
The simulator began, they were in the air 20000 feet above the ground 10 clicks from the 4 best pilots in the world...



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PostFri Oct 10, 2003 2:27 pm    

8 fighters going head to head...this ought to be intersting... thought Mark
"Allright kids heres the rules, flank the leaders and keep an eye on the stragler"Began Mark
"And no kakamazie this time"Finished Vikki
"Mark, we gotta take them head to head..."Allen Began"Because they are prepared for any strategy that any pilot would use..."
"Ya, your right Allen, we must rely on unconventioal tatics..."Said Jonny
"so it KAKAMAZIE TIME!"Yelled Mark as he throddled up and went head to head
"Hes dead"Alllen Stated
"Its been nice knowing him..."Vikki replyed
"HEY MARK DONT TAKE ALL THE FUN LET ME JOIN THE PARTY!"Yelled Jonny as he hit his throdle and began chasing Mark
"C'mon we better make sure they dont get hurt..."Vikki Said
"ITS PARTY TIME" Yelled Allen as he rushedup to join his friends
"ARGE BOYS ARE SOOOOOOOOO IMMATURE!"Yelled Vikki as she joined her friends...



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PostSat Oct 11, 2003 3:38 pm    

"Good morning Lady and Gents, I am Commander Glen Goodwin, your death sentence"Began the lead pilot
"In you dreams"Replyed Allen as he closed the channel
"Mark what are you planning?"Inquired Jonny
"Well im gonna take them head to head, while you three flank them"Repled Mark
"Allright, looks like they wanna play" Answered Allen
"HEY LET ME HAVE SOME FUN " Vikki protested
"Fine, Vikki you and me can take those guys head to head" Answered MArk
"AWWWW how sweet" Replyed Allen
"SHUTUP ALLEN" Mark and Vikki said in unison "Or I will friendly fire you"Finished Mark
They brave pilots then put their plan into action...
Mark and Vikki took the leader head to head and he evaded the mistles and they hit the stragler while Jonny and Allen took on wingman 2
"SPLASH 2" Yelled Allen over the InterCom
"I have taken some heavy damage so im Bugging Out guys, Cya" Jonny Said
Jonnys fighter then went off radar as he bugged out. Allen and Vikki went behind the fighters while Mark posed a Distraction
"oops, I sorda destroyed wingman 3" MArk said
"Dont worry Mark, The leader got Vikki" Allen Repled
It was Mark and Allen taking on the best pilot in the world...
"Mark, Bug out man your not gonna make it" Allen Said
"Ya, but we gotta try our best , and never give up"Mark Replyed as he watched Allens fighter get shot down...He was alone...


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PostSat Oct 11, 2003 10:53 pm    

continue now

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PostSun Oct 12, 2003 1:55 pm    

"Wann give up Mr.Gloade?"Inquired the pilot
"Never ever give up"Replyed Mark as he shut up the pilot.
The other pilto was good, he evaded 12 mistles fired at him but he was only thinking logicly...he would never expect what MArk did next...
This guy knows ever strategy in the book, even the ones that most piltos would never dare to try Mark thought to himself then he got an idea. There was one manivor, if he screwed up he would be destroyed but he put himseld directly infront of the hostile pilot and put his F-14 into defensive mode and he evaded every shot barely then he hit the brakes and the fighter flew right by missing Mark. He then took am and fired 3 mistles and a barrage of machine gun shots...



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PostSun Oct 12, 2003 3:24 pm    

The hostile fighter was obliterated...the simulator then went black as Mark jumped out to see his friends and the 4 fighter pilots...
"Well done kids, we want you to come with us"Said Glen
"What what the-"But they drugged the 4 of them before Mark could finish his sentece...



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PostSun Oct 12, 2003 9:29 pm    

very good now continue

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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 4:52 pm    

"Cant we atleast call our parents, so they dont worry?"Protesed Mark
"Your parents have been informed"Said a tall man in a army uniform with the rank of General
"You kids are the best pilots on the planet, and your not arfaid to take risks"Said another man.
"So, what are you going to do with us?"Inquired Vikki.
"We are sending you to training"Replyed the General"All to Space Training but before we do that we are sending Mr. Gloade to Flight School, Mr. Wolf to Engneering School and Weapons School Mr. Martin will be heading to Weapons School also and Ms. Locke will also be sent to Engneering School."
"Your sending me to Flight School?"Inquired Mark
"No, we are sending you to Fighter Weapons School"Repleyd the Admeral
"Lucky"Allen answered"Top Gun, you get to party every night then hang out with pilots"
"Not so Allen"Vikki replyed"This is not the movie"
"Allright SHUTUP"Began the General"You will be there for 1 year, and you leave in 2 hours.Good Luck kids"


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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 5:29 pm    

"Well cya all in a year.."Mark said
"Ya but you will be like without anyone you know...we wont"Vikki Protested
"Dont worry about him"Allen Repleyd"He will be out drinking and partying with the other pilots"
"Ya, its gonna be fun"Jonny Said
"Good point, well bye"Mark said as he went onto the pane to Mirimar
After about an hour of flying Mark arrived in miramar, he kept to himself during classes...the other pilots thought that Mark could not fly to save his life.As his friends went to their Schools. The first thing Allen did was scout out the grounds and found all the attractive girls and immately put moves on them...Jonny and Vikki on the other hand began to study and work hard...but at Night they went out to the Partys like everyone else. It was Friday when the school began at the end of the day it was a dogfight and everyone had decided to gang up on the 14 year old....They taunted Mark but he ignored them when they went up in the dogfight 9 fighters came at Mark he evaded them and began to open fire with the training lazer...
"Dang hes good" Said a female voice.
Mark Ignored the pilots and hit them all with the training lazer. When he got out on the ground 2 girls approached him and asked him if Mark wanted to go to the party tonight.Makr accepted and walked off his arms around the 2 girls...
Its gonna be an intersting night he thought to himself



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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 6:08 pm    

very good so far

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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 6:41 pm    

Mark woke up the next morning in his quartes with a huge head ache
"Last time im ever staying up that late...i pity the people who have hangovers..." then Mark looked to his side there was one of the girls he walked to the party with and he looked to the other side and there was the other girl...
"what the-"Mark began
"Thanks for sticking up for us"The girl on the right said
"Ya, those guys were mean"The other girl said before giving Mark a kiss.
"WOAH hold on what happend last night?"Inquired Mark
"Well these 2 drunk pilots called us names you stuck up for us and the pilots tried to hit you but you dodged and the went throught a widow"Said the girl on Marks right
"Ya and right to the hospital"Repled the other one
"Hey, I remember now...I was the only one there not drunk...we werent properly intruduced im Mark and you are?"Asked MArk
"Im Karen" said the Blonde girl on Marks right
"And im Telsia"said the short brown haired girl on Marks left
"Well we had better get to class, it starts in half an hour"Mark repled
"Ya, cya later Mark"Said both girls
"Later LAdys"MArk repled



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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 6:58 pm    

(what is this 3 parts a day lol gj)

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PostMon Oct 13, 2003 9:26 pm    

this story has a lot of potental now continue

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PostWed Oct 15, 2003 3:57 pm    

hey give the man a rest he is typin his heart out good job dude this is a great story


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PostThu Oct 16, 2003 11:32 am    

Maga Morgan wrote:
hey give the man a rest he is typin his heart out good job dude this is a great story


I don't think it was meant as something bad...


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