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Jeff Miller Fleet Admiral
Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 23947 Location: Mental Ward for the Mentaly Unstable 6th floor, Saint John's 1615 Delaware Longview Washington 98632
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Sun Aug 24, 2003 11:51 pm Time Killers 1998 |
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Chapter 1: 1998 Here We Come
Jeff: "Ahh no."
Fran: "Jeff whats wrong?"
Jeff: "The Mission Failed ahhhh."
Matt: "His brain waves are going eratic."
Josi: "Can't you help him hes dying."
Jeff: "Times up."
Josi, Matt and Fran can't help but watch as Jeff is errased from history.
Josi: "Jeff JEFF is the portal still open?"
Fran: "Yes but why do you want to know?"
Josi: "Because Im going back to 1998."
Fran: "Theres no proof Jeff is still alive back than."
Josi: "Im going to take my chance."
Fran: "If you go back now you'll take your 11 year old form hold on I'll make a temporal duplicate when I send you back you'll go as a 16 year old girl you'll be the same age as Jeff is and you'll have your memories."
Fran types some buttons and a light engulfs Josi.
Fran: "Ok your ready for temporal transport remember since your in duplicate mode you don't have to worry about any changes to the timeline you'll still be in contact with us just think and the link will open."
Josi: "Ok Im ready send me back."
Fran presses some buttons and Josi closes her eyes she goes from the security of 2020 to the cold reality of 1998 she was 30 but now shes taken the form of a innocent and pure 16 year old. She feels dizzy than she hears noises she opens her eyes.
Josi: "Ok Im back in time but when."
Josi looks around she sees leaves on the ground and there is a cold snap in the wind.
Josi: "Yeah this must be fall I remember Jeff telling me about what it was like...."
Josi hears a noise she looks behind her and sees a Teenager being chased by 7 other Teens hes running for his life but trips and falls to the ground.
Boy: "Ouch I should be more carefull about where I run."
The Teens catch up to him.
Boy 2: "You know Miller you don't know your place in the grand scheme of things your kind is here to give me money now where is it?"
Jeff: "I don't owe you anything just because your the captain of the football team doesn't mean Jack, we aren't afraid of you Freighdenburg."
Chris: "Oh you will be take care of him and make it real painfull."
The 6 boys beat the living hell out of Jeff but he tries to fight back it just makes the beating worst. Josi runs to Jeff.
Josi: "God what the hell is wrong with you what did he do to you?"
Chris: "Its clear your new here so I'll let you know. Kelso is my Domain this city belongs to me get with the program or get your ass kicked. later sweet cheeks."
Chris and his gang leaves Jeff looks like he just had the living hell beat out of him Josi tries to pick him up.
Josi: "Are you ok?"
Jeff: "Who are you?"
Josi: "Im a new girl my name is Josi nice to meet you."
Josi smiles at Jeff hoping he'll know who she is but he doesn't.
Jeff: "Thanks a word of advice stay away from me Im not a good person to be around I tend to get people hurt."
Jeff limps home right now he lives in 912 Elizabeth Josi remembered Jeff talking about that place it was a nice place he used to say she secertely follows him to the house she listens under a open window.
Synthia: "What happened Jeff?"
Synthia goes to get some proxide and band-aids she goes into the house Jeff lives with his mother along with his aunt, uncle and cousin.
Mary: "Why do you need the proxide?"
Synthia: "Jeff got beat up on the way home."
Mary: "God can't that useless kid do anything I swear hes a good for nothing lazy child."
Jeff's bedroom is in the garage he thought he could escape Marys harsh words but he can't hide no matter what Jeff looks at the floor he knows shes right he doesn't have the courage to fight yet atleast but he will in the future. Josi is under the bedroom window listening.
Josi: (Thinking) "Geepers he never told me it was like this for him."
Josi is thinking to the point she doesn't hear Jeff's bedroom door to the outside open Jeff is taking the garbage out he has some bandages on his face he sees her.
Jeff: "What the hell are you doing?"
Josi: "Uh I just wanted to make sure your ok I was worried about you."
Jeff narrows his eyes looking at her thats a normal trait he has when hes determining if shes telling the truth or not.
Jeff: "I don't need anyone to worry about me I can handle myself."
Josi: "Oh like you did with Chris and his gang...."
Jeff and Josi have small fights even in the future so this isn't any different.
Jeff: "Listen just go away."
Josi: "NO I will not admit it or not you need me."
Jeff: "I need no one."
Jeff slams the door shut. Josi thinks this could have gone better she leaves than realises that she doesn't have the place to sleep she thinks and the link to the future is open.
Fran: "Fran here how is it going Josi?"
Josi: "Not good I need you to alter the local bank in the present to give me a account with unlimited money in it and I need schol papers for Kelso highschool Im going back to school."
Fran: "Understood I'll send you the papers and have the bank account ready your home residence in that year will be the motel 6 one block from the highschool."
Josi: "Understood. Josi out."
Josi Closes the link to the future she goes to her room and rest shes trying to remember what it was like back in this time but she was actually 11. The next day she goes to the school wearing what she always wanted to she wears a short skirt that shows her backside a thin see though top and nice shoes she enters and all the guys are looking at her they whoop and hollar Jeff sees Josi but turns and walks away Josi follows Jeff to his locker in the C section cordior.
Josi: "Hey hows your eye?"
She feels the area above his eye Jeff doesn't fight he than holds her hand its clear hes starting to get used to her she smiles at him than Jeff comes to.
Jeff: "Stay away from me."
Jeff leaves going to the males locker room waiting for school to start.
To be continued......
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Thomas Pool Princess
Joined: 08 Jul 2001 Posts: 19730 Location: Manchester
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Mon Aug 25, 2003 3:26 am |
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Interesting start. You could do with using a bit more grammar though.
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Josi Rockholt Fleet Admiral
Joined: 29 Dec 2001 Posts: 10136 Location: Boston, Ma
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Mon Aug 25, 2003 6:43 pm |
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Hey,great start. I love it.
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