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PostSat Jul 26, 2003 11:35 pm    A Voyager Story [can't think of a good title]

�Let�s have it, Harry! You know you can tell me anything,� a grinning Lieutenant Tom Paris told his best friend, Ensign Harry Kim. �All right, if you insist. I dreamt I was walking down the street in San Francisco, when I saw someone who looked like Libby. Or so I thought. I tried to call her, but all she did was ignore me. So I tapped her on the shoulder to get her attention. She turned around and � � Kim took a deep breath, chuckling a little. �C�mon, Harry, what?� asked Paris, his grin widening. �It turned out to be Megan Delaney,� Harry whispered, blushing a little. �Ooh� weird. Maybe that was a message. That you should start dating Meg,� Paris teased. �Oh I don�t know�� Kim started to reply, but was cut short by a message from the Captain. �Senior officers please report to your stations immediately.� �Better don�t bump into Megan. We don�t want Harry Kim to dehydrate now, would we?� Paris said jokingly. Kim grinned and shook his head, as they entered a turbolift.

�From what I can tell, it�s a perfectly normal wormhole,� Kim reported. �Does it lead to Earth?� the Captain asked. �I dunno�� Kim tapped in some commands into the console, �I can�t detect what�s on the other side.� Janeway sighed. �Send a probe into the wormhole and notify me if someone replies. I�ll be in my ready room.� �Wait, Captain�� Kim said, stopping Janeway in her tracks. �There�s something coming through the wormhole. It appears to be an alien ship of unknown origin. It�s heavily damaged� �Scan for life-signs,� the Captain ordered. �One life-sign detected, very weak,� Kim said. �Beam it directly to Sickbay,� Janeway said, �now, if you�ll excuse me, I�ll be in my ready room.�

[Tell me what you think. The story ain't finished yet. There's plenty more to come.]


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PostSat Jul 26, 2003 11:53 pm    

I like it very alot

It is great!



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PostSun Jul 27, 2003 1:21 am    

I liked it alot
It should be called The Wormhole. (kinda gay)
Finish writting it for sure than read it over when ur done then it should be easier.


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PostSun Jul 27, 2003 1:59 am    

Heh, I've thought of naming it 'The Wormhole'. In fact, that's the filename I saved it as. But sounds too... gay (I have no idea words can be homosexual ).

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PostSun Jul 27, 2003 10:42 am    

^ LOL.
Well, in their own way maybe.


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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 12:26 am    

Since I have very little to go on as far as who's in the ship...I'd suggest "Voyage of the Damned" (obviously the wormhole doesn't go to Earth...at least that's what I'm assuming). If it's a love storyu about Harry and Libby or even Meg, I'd call it "Bittersweet" cuz we all know how Harry's love life goes...

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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 12:32 am    

It's not at all about Harry's love life. I think Voyager had too many of those episodes, and, I'm not thinking of writing another one. Yeah, it's about the wormhole. But I still don't know where it leads...

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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 12:59 am    

How about "End of the Road"?

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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 5:41 am    

What does 'End of the Road' suggest? End of their journey?

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PostMon Jul 28, 2003 2:31 pm    

That's a good start!

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PostThu Aug 07, 2003 9:40 pm    

Maybe not the end of their journey...maybe the end of the journey for whomever is in that shuttle?

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PostFri Aug 08, 2003 8:39 am    

Heh, thanks man. I've been putting this off for a long time, because I ain't got no ideas for what's gonna happen...

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PostWed Sep 17, 2003 7:21 pm    

That beggining is exactly like a stv story I read. The peron in the ship was Kathryn's baby from the future.....

Continue!


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PostThu Sep 18, 2003 2:40 pm    

IluvCaptainKathrynJaneway wrote:
That beggining is exactly like a stv story I read. The peron in the ship was Kathryn's baby from the future.....

Continue!


Off topic: Who was the father of the child? I think I have read something similar.


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PostFri Sep 26, 2003 9:43 am    

I've never read that fan fic. And I know I really should be continuing this story... but I just don't feel like it. Heh, sorry guys. I'll come back to it at a later date.

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