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Jeff Miller
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PostSat Mar 09, 2002 1:15 pm    Moonlight Bay (PG-13)

A brief intro

Come to moonlight bay the the city by the ocean where romance is in the air 24-7-365 we promise that your first night in Moonlight Bay you will have a girlfriend or boyfriend there is a mystical aura that circles this beauitful town.

I will post the first chapter some time today or tommarow

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PostSat Mar 09, 2002 1:16 pm    

That seems cool, Jeff!

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PostSat Mar 09, 2002 1:37 pm    

That seems pretty cool!!!!!!!!!

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PostSun Mar 10, 2002 5:40 am    

sounds great

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PostSun Mar 10, 2002 9:09 am    

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On 2002-03-09 12:15, Jeff Miller wrote:
A brief intro

Come to moonlight bay the the city by the ocean where romance is in the air 24-7-365 we promise that your first night in Moonlight Bay you will have a girlfriend or boyfriend there is a mystical aura that circles this beauitful town.

I will post the first chapter some time today or tommarow



Can't wait to read it.



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PostSun Mar 10, 2002 12:33 pm    

*I am driving to Moonlight bay I have heard that this place has a mystical feeling about it I hear that it is easy to fall in love I wonder if it will work for me I get to the hotel and I park my truck*

CHAPTER 1: LOST

Person: �Room for one please�

Clerk: �that will be $25.00 per day here is your key and I will need your name for the register�

Person: �Jeff Miller�

Clerk: �Right Mr. Miller have a good stay at out motel if you need anything please feel free to ask your room is on the top floor its room 748.�

* The clerk hands Jeff the key*

Jeff Miller: �Thanks�

* That was 10 days ago that�s all I can remember now. I open my eyes I am in a shower warm water is pouring down on me I look up at the steam I hear the radio in the shower playing some music I don�t know who it is all of a sudden someone hugs me I feel her body against mine I am confused who is she does she know me?*

Woman: �Are you having a good shower did you miss me?�

* I look down unsure how to answer all I say is*

Jeff Miller: �Yes�

TO BE CONTINUED�




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PostSun Mar 10, 2002 1:24 pm    

Woah! That was quite odd, but cool!
Ive written some books myself, Childrens-books mostly. Butt his one is far better then any of mine! I mean it!



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PostMon Mar 11, 2002 1:09 pm    

Depending if I get any replies I will post the next chapter in the next few days.



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PostMon Mar 25, 2002 3:37 am    

it's good!

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PostFri Mar 29, 2002 1:08 pm    

A romance,,No one has done one I think.



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PostThu Dec 26, 2002 8:02 pm    

Chapter 2: Woman in Red

*I keep looking at the floor in the shower the steam is very relaxing I try to remember but when I do my head hurts it feels like a drill is pounding in my head*

Woman: "How could you start without me? You know I love having a nice warm shower with you."

*The Woman continues to keep her arms around me there is a scent on her that is rather sedusive I breath it in.*

Jeff: "Sorry I was just being frogy you know me."

*Smiles trying to get her to think I know who she is she hugs me and kisses me the water pouring off her face smileing than kissing me I kiss her back her kiss makes me feel like I have known her for along time her face is like silk. We spend awhile in the shower than we both get out her long blond hair going down to her lower back she looks awesome wet and in all her glory.*

Jeff: "So what do we have planed for today?"

*smileing*

Woman: "You know what we have planed lol I know what your up to Mr. Miller."

Jeff: *Thinking* "Does she know about me not knowing her? what will I do."

To Be Continued.



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PostThu Dec 26, 2002 8:05 pm    

Im sorry for taking so long to reply I had a major case of writers block with this story please let me know what you think


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PostFri Dec 27, 2002 8:23 am    

Cool... Hope you continue it soon


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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 1:46 pm    

Chapter 3: Into the Unknown

Jeff: *Trying to act like he knows what shes talking about* "And whats that?" *Smileing at her*

Woman: "You just want to get out of going swiming with me and my friends you think they are too stuck up." *Wraps a towell around her awesome body and one around her hair letting it dry she walks into another part of the bathroom*

Jeff: "Your right I am I just don't like being around crowds." *thinking* "Im not sure if I do like crowds or not." *Looks and sees she is busy putting on her clothing and Makeup she first slips into a swiming suit that makes her body look 10 Times better Jeff slips out into the livingroom with a towell around his waist he sees the womans purse and quietly opens it up he pulls out her I.D and reads it thinking to himself.* "It says, Susan King could that woman be Susan King?" *puts the I.D away when he hears her talking Jeff gets dressed in the bathroom along with her she looks over and smiles at him.*

Susan: "Did I ever tell you that you look hot when you come out of the showe?"

Jeff: "Not today atleast." *Thinking* "Not even sure if you have."

*While Jeff is getting dressed Susan Pushes him down onto the floor and gets onto him.*

Jeff: *Thinking* "Oh no did she see me looking at her purse?"

To Be Continued...



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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 3:36 pm    

hmm... did she see... have to wait


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 11:21 am    

Continue the story please

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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 4:49 pm    

very good story


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 5:37 pm    

Chapter 4: Susan

*Jeff looks up at Susan worried for his life*

Jeff: "Is something wrong?" *Looking up at Susan*

Susan: "Yes you didn't give me my good morning kiss like you normaly do." *Susan kisses Jeff as hard as she can Jeff can't fight her. Susan than gets off and finishes getting ready Jeff does the same he puts his socks and shoes on than sits on the couch and waits for her.*

Susan: "Ready"

Jeff: "Great"

*Jeff and Susan leave the room and walk outside its sunny and bright Jeff looks around trying to get some memories of the area but he doesn't Jeff and Susan get into her Viper and head to the other end of the beach where they are spose to meet friends 15 minutes later they get there. Susan and Jeff get out of the car Susan runs over to a woman Jeff doesn't know and kisses her cheek."

Susan: "Its been so long Ive missed you alot how are you?"

Woman: "Im ok thanks for asking how are you?" *Looks over and sees Jeff siting on the side of the car.* "Oh is that him he looks sexy."

Susan: "Yep thats my man hes so awesome Jeff can you come over and meet a friend of mine?"

Jeff: "Sure" *Walks over and looks at the woman*

Woman: "Hi my name is Amanda nice to meet you Jeff." *Smiles* "This is my assitant Mr. Jeremy."

*A tall man with imense muscles walk over with a look on his face like hes not to be messed with. Jeff looks at him and than all of a sudden gets a memory.*

Man: "Who are you?"

*Its pouring rain and it looks like a storm.*

Jeff: "I don't have to tell you anything get out of my way or I will move you myself."

Man: "I would like to see that trick get him." *All of a Sudden 2 guys grab Jeff's Arms.*

Jeff: "Let Me go now."

*All of a sudden the person in the mask Punches Jeff in the STomach making him fall to his Knees and catching his breath than Jeff gets back up and tries to get free all of a sudden Jeff gets hit on the back of the head and everything goes dark. Jeff snaps back to reality and looks at the man.*

Jeff: "Have we met before?"

Jeremy: "Not that I know of."

*Jeff thinks to himself*

To be continued...



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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 6:02 pm    

It should be continued now Keep writing please

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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 6:18 pm    

Chapter 5: Memories Shattered

*Jeff looks at Jeremy after he said what he did and watches Jeremy walk off.*

Jeff: *Thinking* "Something isn't right there is something about him I don't get why is he the way he is and why does he look so familar is he someone I know?"

*Susan and Becky are sitting on the beach rubbing Sun Lotion on eachother they are talking about things that wouldn't intrest Jeff. Jeff goes and walks around to the house and finds Jeremy talking on his Cell phone.*

Jeff: "Hello." *Smiles looking at Jeremy.*

Jeremy: "......" *Jeremy is quiet he turns and walks away rudely ignoring Jeff, Jeff looks at him and is kind of stun at Jeremy actions than out of no where Jeff pics Jeremies pockes quickly getting a Cell Phone and his Wallet, Jeff is wondering where he got those skills*

Jeff: *Thinking* "Ok thats something a normal person doesn't do." *Jeff puts the cell phone and wallet into a safe area where no one will find them than walks back to Susan its been about 5 hours and its dark.* "Come on baby its time to go home." *Smiles*

Susan: "Your right." *smiles and looks at Amanda* Im sorry but we should get going maybe we can talk soon."

Amanda: "Your right I would like that." *Smiles Amanda walks Jeff and Susan to the car and smiles.* "Come back it was nice meeting you Jeff."

Jeff: "I agree thanks for inviting us."

*They share their goodbyes and Jeff and Susan leave. Awhile later they get back to their room Jeff takes the wallet and Cell phone with him. They both take a shower and go to bed its late. little do they know they are being watched there is a person on the roof on a another building watching them though s pair of Binulicars*

Man: "He has it."

*The man is talking on a radio*

Voice on the Radio: "Understood keep me updated."

To be Continued...



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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 4:44 am    

Nice


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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 2:01 pm    

Good story keep writing

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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 4:29 pm    

very good story keep on a writing


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 12:56 pm    

Chapter 6: Under watch

*Jeff and Susan are laying in bed sleeping Jeff wakes up feeling un easy thinking to himself.*

Jeff: *Thinking* "Why can't I remember why don't I remember Susan what happened to me during the time I can't remember?" *Jeff gets up out of bed the blanket pulled back alittle showing that Jeff and Susan was close that night Susan with a slight smile on her face Jeff goes and gets the Wallet that he lifted from Jeremy he opens it up and looks in it he finds money, Credit cards, a ID card, A driver license card and 2 cards he doesn't reconize one looks like a I.D. Card for a job on it it says Omni Corp. The other card seems to be a Card Key but it doesn't look like any normal card Key. Jeff takes it over to a card reader in the livingroom and swipes it the reader shows that its a universal card key that it does anything the holder of the card wants Jeff thinks to himself again.*

Jeff: *Thinking* "Why would he need a card like this?" *Theres a noise in the bedroom.*

Susan: "Jeff are you here?"

Jeff: "Im here."

Susan: "Why don't you come back to bed I would like to cuddle with you."

Jeff: "Ok."

*Jeff walks back into the bedroom and gets back into bed Susan rubs his chest and kisses his neck she tells him that she loves him susan than gets ontop of Jeff and rubs his chest.*

Susan: "I would like us to formaly get together its clear we love eachother." *She continues to rub Jeff's Chest in a slow and seductive manner rubbing her body up and down Jeff's.*

Jeff: *Moaning in pleasure* "I would like that too how about we go out and look for a ring tommarow?"

Susan: "Really?" *smiles getting bigger*

Jeff: "Yeah than I will ask the question tommarow."

Susan: *Is Speechless she just lays on Jeff kissing him harder and harder*

*Meanwhile on the rooftop the person is still watching them his radio goes off again.*

The Voice on the Radio: "Status report."

Man: "Everything is going on track as hoped it would."

To be Continued...



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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 1:49 pm    

Nice!


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