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B'Elanna__Torres
Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Joined: 22 Jul 2002
Posts: 85
Location: Starfleet Command
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 Sun Mar 02, 2003 10:15 am Stories! |
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hello,
I've been writing storys about different kind of things. Its been on The X-Files and Voyager mostly. Here is a story that I just wrote about 3 days ago........... it dose not have a title but maybe you can help me come up with one after you have read it.
This is the story
One day there was a hole bunch of people at my house. I thought it was my B-day but I was wrong! All, well most of the people were crying 
My little sister was watching TV. She was sitting on the couch crying
I asked her what was wrong and she didn't even look up at me. I had to go to the bathroom and when I opened the door I saw a dead body. There was blood all over. That person was me. I killed my self.
the end.
Did you like the story. Have any ideas? Please if you want you can post a story you have wrote  
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admiral
Lieutenant Commander
Joined: 24 Sep 2002
Posts: 252
Location: bridge of U.S.S Akira
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| Sun Mar 02, 2003 1:55 pm |
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i don't have them
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Matrix881
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Joined: 19 Feb 2003
Posts: 520
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| Sun Mar 02, 2003 2:48 pm |
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don't you think its kind of short?
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Voy_Girl
Admiral
Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Sun Mar 02, 2003 3:45 pm |
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That short piece contains a lot of angst, that's for sure.
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B'Elanna__Torres
Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Joined: 22 Jul 2002
Posts: 85
Location: Starfleet Command
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| Tue Mar 04, 2003 5:01 pm |
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Well, its how I feel
thank you voy_girl
And matrix881, its short but I wil post some long ones soon
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Voy_Girl
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Joined: 07 Jan 2002
Posts: 8302
Location: Fair Haven
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| Wed Mar 05, 2003 4:09 pm |
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Will be nice to read some more...
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B'Elanna__Torres
Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Joined: 22 Jul 2002
Posts: 85
Location: Starfleet Command
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| Wed Mar 05, 2003 7:21 pm |
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Well, I'm working on a Walker, Texas Ranger story know so as soon as I finish it I'll post it here If any of u have written storys you can also post it here if you feel ok about it 
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Melodramatic
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Joined: 04 Feb 2003
Posts: 4577
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| Fri Mar 07, 2003 8:34 pm |
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Well,
Great story I think it has alot of your emotioins inside!
I dont think they are good! I get the impression that you wanna kill ur self
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