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Deciviel
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PostWed Jan 15, 2003 4:17 pm    Struggle (Poem)

It�s a struggle when I see you,
to tell you how I feel,
To tell you that I need you,
It�s ripping me apart.

The words form in my mind,
but never reach my lips,
I hesitate to tell you,
for fear my world will come crashing down.

Oh, why can�t I tell you,
why is it such a struggle,
to just tell you how I feel,
to tell you that I love you?

I have fallen from paradise,
at the first sight of you,
and the only way to get back there
is if you�re with me.

I yearn to release my feelings,
to set my heart free.
Whenever you are near me I tremble,
I gasp for breath.

For your godliness has taken the breath from my lungs,
I struggle to remain on my feet,
without fainting
at the melodic sound of your voice.

It�s such a struggle to keep myself sane,
not being able to tell you how I feel.
It�s such a struggle keeping my feelings pent up inside,
not being able to tell you how I feel.



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Voy_Girl
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PostThu Jan 16, 2003 3:01 pm    

Very good


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Chakotays Angel
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PostMon Jan 20, 2003 2:13 pm    

Wow Powerful

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Lxe
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PostMon Feb 17, 2003 1:46 am    

very beautiful, I love it.

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