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Zefram Cochrane
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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 7:11 pm    

Great! but the crew is very emotional in this story.


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 7:43 pm    

LOl.... Not.....My.......Fault.... I SWEAR!
SHUSH!

Yeh I sorta noticed that too and its a bit too late to change it so meh... i guess everyone wil have to out up w/ it. lol
I have sum more.



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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 7:46 pm    

Then there was Seven. When she first came aboard she was scared of this Ex-Borg, but soon realized at Seven was just a big child at heart. She had never grown up so, Naomi and her became close. Naomi loved Seven with all her heart, and they had become closer over the past years.
She turned a corner and entered the turbolift.
�Bridge.� She told the computer, and then the soothing sounds of the lift, eased her thoughts. The lights were low, and the Alert siren could still be heard all thought Naomi was she hadn�t felt weapons hit the ship in over half an hour.
The bridge was not brighter than the Turbolift. There were fires everywhere, and bulkheads were scattered. She frantically looked around for Commander Chakotay and found him near the Ops Station.
Naomi rushed over to him and found him unconscious beside Harry Kim. Naomi injected the Commander with a hyperspray she found in the emergency med kit.
Chakotay�s eyes flickered open, but still were blurry. He tried to sit up, but relinquished back to lying down, after he felt very dizzy. He looked up at the person who had just awoken him.

�Naomi,� he smiled, �Your not supposed to be on the bridge during a Red Alert�
She laughed back at him, �Well I thought that this was a matter of emergency, sir. Are you ok? What happened?�
�Just a bit dizzy, I�ll be alright.� Again, Chakotay started to sit up, ignoring the throbbing pain in his head. �We were attacked by a race called the Hejorans. They wouldn�t respond to hails and just kept firing on our weak point- the places that were never repaired from the last attack. There was a big explosion and everyone on the bridge became unconscious. When I last checked the shield they were at 5%.� He told her, intentionally not mentioning that he woke up minutes before. The images were still fresh in his mind. God, Kathryn looked so beautiful!



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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 4:41 am    

wonderful new chapters...


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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 5:12 pm    

wait...wait I'm I reading this does chacotay is in love with (Throws up)
Janeway!



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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 5:58 pm    

dun throw up you have to clean up the mess yourself..


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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 7:47 pm    

very good


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 8:32 am    

-_-VoyagerFanatic-_- wrote:
dun throw up you have to clean up the mess yourself..
Too true.....


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 9:47 am    

of course!


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 12:28 pm    



We need more, Leah!!



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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 3:45 pm    

before we die of withdrawel pains


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 6:25 pm    

yeah me too im going crazy


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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 8:25 am    

I agree wiht both of your reasons!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!


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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 12:49 pm    

I'm...dying.......must........have...........more


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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 3:44 pm    

...cant.......stop.....laughing..... must... BREATH!!!.... humm... letta me check my folder and see if i have written any more *goes and checks*

Ahh Even I hate the stupid sappy ness.....grrrrr lol...*shakes fist* Y I OTTA.... yeh umm.... stupid sappy ness....(still checking)
No sorry.. I havent no more written. but hum... I'll be home all day today. Maybe I can write more! YES! ok... tonight... I SWEAR



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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 7:55 pm    

yeah you better lol jk


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 2:10 am    

Naomi walked over to Ops, checked the shields, and the stasis of the ship.

�I know you really don�t want to hear this commander, but we�re dead in the water.� She looked over at her commanding officer, the �Captain� of Voyager for the past three months. Realizing she was staring she quickly regained herself. She realized that her mother was not on the bridge she said, �My Mom, where is she?�

Chakotay paused for a second, trying to think straight. Sam, Sam where was she.
�Engineering. I sent her down there to help B�Elanna. I assume she is still there.�
�If your alright commander, I would like to go see if she is alright, and check on the rest of the crew. I�ll find out where the Doctor is and send him up here.�
�Yeah, I�ll be ok. Go find your mom. Thanks Naomi.�
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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 6:45 am    

I's still real good...


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 10:35 am    

sure it is


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 1:34 pm    

wow I thought it was longer. No one tonight.... I've got front row seats for a Raptors game and then my Best friend is sleeping over so I really wont be on... tomorrow tho


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 3:37 pm    

have a nice time...


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 7:07 pm    

Lets hope nobody dies in your story ...the emotional crew wont be able to take it!


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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 8:47 pm    

Captain Leah Manzer wrote:
wow I thought it was longer. No one tonight.... I've got front row seats for a Raptors game and then my Best friend is sleeping over so I really wont be on... tomorrow tho


you have front row seats??? The Raptors are my second favorite team behind the Kings Morris Peterson Vince Carter man youre so lucky



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PostFri Jan 03, 2003 11:51 pm    

AWw it was great YEH front row seat...we lost 80 to 81 tho.... 2.02 seconds left in the game man!

No they woudnt..... My emotional crew would all break down.......start crying and all... so sad *sarcastically* I don't write this for you ZC



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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 10:41 am    

lol, just write, anything will do, as long as it keeps up with your usual standard


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