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PostSat Dec 21, 2002 4:23 pm    

I just read it again and it really is good..


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PostMon Dec 23, 2002 9:59 am    

i'll make sure i relay tt to my friend


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PostMon Dec 23, 2002 4:06 pm    

Do that, and wish her a good xmas too ..


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PostTue Dec 24, 2002 9:54 am    

k, and i'll say merry christmas to u on her behalf, since i dun think tt i 'd be able to relay the message to her in time


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PostWed Dec 25, 2002 3:20 pm    

ok,that's fine... Hope you have/had a merry time too


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PostFri Dec 27, 2002 8:47 pm    

Merry Christmas - now post more

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PostFri Dec 27, 2002 10:00 pm    

pushy aren't you gimme one day, i'm busy now... sorry


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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 8:05 am    

Just a question; Is the story finished already or does your friend write as it goes along?


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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 9:56 am    

i see you haven't clicked the link i posted anyway, she's still writing it, but i have yet to post the chapters tt are already out


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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 3:40 pm    

What link... I 've missed somthing again!


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PostSat Dec 28, 2002 7:41 pm    

^ I don't know either...and VF - that's no excuse I know, I know, we're all busy.

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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 4:13 am    

fine fine fine here it is

chapter 10

Sora walked down the deserted alley. Her mind kept replaying the kissing scene over and over again. The way Matt's lips moved, his tongue, his hands his.. Man, she really needed to stop thinking about him. She felt a really bad case of a headache coming up and she was feeling very dizzy. The faster she got home the better.

Suddenly, a silhouette of a man stepped in front of her. Thinking it was Matt, she yelled, "Get the heck out of here!". When the figure didn't move, she squinted at the figure. The figure was wearing dirty and torn clothes, his face was ugly with hair growing all over the place, and he had a small goatee with a scar on his cheek. Oh *beep*, it definitely wasn't Matt. But he wasn't a problem; she knew she could easily defeat this guy even when her headache was getting worse. Out of the blue, three more men stepped out. "Oh freak," Sora mumbled. Then, they each pulled out a shiny blade, which reflected the mystical moonlight. Suddenly, the men ran forward with their knives flashing. Sora dodged their swipes, but it wouldn't work for long. She tried to punch and kick back but her mind was in a dazed. She couldn't think straight, and then she felt a blow on her chest. Unprepared, she fell onto the ground hard. Blackness washed over her. "What is wrong with me?" Sora thought weakly, "Why can't I fight back? Why am I feeling so weak?" Looking up, she could only see the faint outline of their bodies. She felt shooting pain as she was being kicked around. Surrendering to the darkness, Sora fell into unconsciousness.

Matt walked towards an alley that used to be a gangster hangout. But he didn't know what was telling him to go there. He never went there before. It was just like an instinct. As he rounded the corner, he could hear kicking and punching sounds. As his eyes adjusted to the light, he noticed that the victim was a girl. Quite pretty in fact. Straight brown hair and. "Oh *beep*!" Matt thought as his eyes darted to her body, a black tank top? Fire? Black pants with swirls? Oh gawd! It was Sora! Matt's mind raced, all he could think was, "Its Sora! Its Sora!" Then, he saw a flash of a blade bearing down on her.

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Matt didn't know what he was doing before his brain registered his movements. He lashed out kicks, punches from judo, karate, martial arts, kung fu.. For a split second, he transformed into a fighting machine. The fight only lasted a few minutes; all four of them were on the ground unconscious.

Matt was breathing hard. He couldn't believe he took down four guys whom all had knives in a few minutes! His eyes roamed over to Sora. It looked liked she was beaten up very badly. Walking briskly over to her, he lifted her up easily. He heard Sora give a weak groan. Piggy backing her, he walked briskly towards his apartment a few blocks away.

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Matt placed Sora on his bed. Now what?? He absent-mindedly caressed her soft smooth cheeks only to pull back quickly. God!! She was HOT!! As in HOTTT!!! She was having a really high fever. Matt quickly went out and grabbed a pack of ice and returned. He kept sponging her hoping to bring down the fever. Once in a while, Sora would stir or shiver a bit but never once waking up. It was way before midnight before Matt finally slept sitting up from sheer exhaustion.

Matt awoke to Sora's shivering. Looking confused, Matt stared at Sora thinking she was awake. Looking weary at his watch, he realized it was four in the morning. He could see little bits of sweat on her forehead. But she was shivering really badly. Tiredly, he got up, grabbed another blanket and a jacket from his cupboard and returned. He put on the jacket (on Sora) and covered her in the blanket and returned to sleep.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sora opened her eyes weakly, shading the sunlight. She felt really horrible. She could barely remember what happened last night. Her body was in pain, she was extremely cold but some how very hot and. Holy crap. Where was she?? She sat up and looked around to see. Matt.

Matt wasn't awake yet, so Sora just stared, observing him. He looked exhausted. An ice pack that was now water lay next to him. Sora then realized that she was wearing his jacket and she was in his bed!!!! (Slow I know) "Oh man. this is so not good" Sora mumbled as she swept her hair back. Giving a startled yelp. She slowly put her hand on her forehead. "Oh damn, I got a fever!! And plus, I am in my worse enemy's house! Wow, cant things get better?" Sora muttered to herself sarcastically. Shivering, she pulled up the covers and tried to sleep again, curling up into a ball to maximize the heat.

It was around eleven am when Matt finally woke up. He checked Sora's temperature and after about half a minute, the thermometer started beeping. Whipping it out from under her arm, he gasped in shocked. 41.9 degrees!! Hurriedly, he got another pack of ice and started nursing Sora.

Around an hour or intensive ice packing, Matt's stomach gave a loud rumble. Grumbling, he went to the kitchen to make instant noodles for his precious stomach. Wolfing it down, he ate it in about five minutes. Not bothered to wash the bowl, Matt just dumped it into the sink that was filled to the brim with dirty bowls. Wrinkling his face in disgust at the filthy sight, he left to tend that lazy bitch with a high fever sleeping on his bed.

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It was around late afternoon when Sora FINALLY woke up again. "So the lazy freak finally decided to wake up." A cold voice drawled. Sora whipped her head around to meet up with Matt's sneering face. Sora groaned. She didn't need to go through with this, her head was in a total dazed, she felt so weak. she felt so cold. so cold.. "Yo? Earth to Sora?? We have lost contact!!" Matt's annoying voice rang through her ears. Not bothering with a comeback, Sora just gave Matt a glare with her lifeless eyes.

"Why am I here?"

Matt ran through his hair in frustration, he didn't even have time to comb his hair!! Sighing, he replied sarcastically," I kidnapped you on your way back and I insist that since I gave you some nursing service, I should be paid about 10 million bucks in cold hard cash."

"Whatever. Just tell me okay?"

Matt heaved a sigh. She was no fun when she was sick. Giving up, he sucked in a huge mouthful of air and said," the summary. You got your ass kicked, I saved your ungrateful neck, you somehow got sick, judging by the fact you had a fever and you were shivering, you have Malaria. You had been sleeping like a pig until about now which is five pm for your information and now I am going to the kitchen to cook some poison for your stomach!" After gulping a considerable amount of air, Matt stalked out, leaving Sora with very disoriented thoughts.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++BED TIME.++++++++++++++++++++++++

Matt was watching some TV. There was absolutely nothing interesting on the tube. Who wants to watch Days of our lives? (No offense people) Making up his mind to get some rest since it was already twelve midnight, he took some cushions and put them on the couch. Suddenly, he just remembered. Sora. As quietly as he could, he crept into his bedroom.

Looking at Sora, he could see her body shivering in the darkness. Tiptoeing up to her, Matt slid into his bed. He could feel her burning up, but yet, she was shivering like crazy. Knowing there were no other blankets, Matt twisted her around so her face was against his chest. Wrapping his arms tightly around her to give her more warmth. "Man, she is so gonna pay for this. giving me all this crap. It is not like I don't have *beep* of my own." Matt mumbled under his breath. He really needed to go and grab some medicine for her in the morning. Looking at his sleeping angel/devil, he sighed and drifted off to sleep still cursing about Sora in his mind.

the link is http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=800297&chapter=1



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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 1:38 pm    

Great!! Thanks for the link


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 2:07 pm    

lol you're welcome


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 2:23 pm    

I think i'll go there now or soon


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 3:02 pm    

go, cause i might take a long time to post


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PostSun Dec 29, 2002 4:45 pm    

oh ok.... though that doesn't mean that you can stop posting...


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PostMon Dec 30, 2002 6:02 pm    

fine


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 8:25 am    

guess what? I forgot to copy the link....! ah, I'll do it now instead


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 9:48 am    

lol


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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 12:43 pm    

I forgot it once more...!!!!!

anyway, how's the next chap here going?



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PostTue Dec 31, 2002 3:48 pm    

erm, not here yet? anyway, when you do go to fanfiction.net, my one word of advice to you is tt you read slowly, cause she's stopped writting, writer's block you know...


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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 8:20 am    

OKay, <i'll read as s l o w as I can


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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 9:45 am    

I've read it - it's good, but she needs to write more!

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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 2:58 pm    

I've read it at FF.Net now... She didn't have a little amount of reviews! 158!!!


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