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PostFri Dec 13, 2002 10:43 am    One Love, One life, One child, and One future.....

I always wondered what would happen if Kathryn and Chakotay had a child. What would he or she be like? What would they name him or her? Where would they live? Yes well, why wait? Odds are I'll never know the answer, so I'll write it. From my mind to this site,I hope you enjoy...

Prologue

I remember when I was five years old I found a hurt baby bird. My mother, Admiral Kathryn Janeway, told me it was sickly and would most likely die.

"But Momma, you have to make it better." I cried.

"Taya...my dear Taya...this is what nature wants." She tried to expalin, but I didn't understand.

"Momma...why can't we make it better again?" I asked.

My father , Admiral Chakotay, stepped on to our porch. He is very tall, and I love him very much. We live in Indiana, and have a smalll ranch house.

"Look Taya, sometimes these things happen." He tried again to explain.

"But why? It's only a baby."

"She's like a child Kathryn, she is so innocent."

Will continue soon.



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PostFri Dec 13, 2002 10:51 am    

interesting


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PostFri Dec 13, 2002 12:36 pm    

Proplogue (con't)

"Yes, and so beautiful." She replied, an when she looked at me she had a faraway loo in hre eyes.

"But what about the baby bird Momma?" I asked.

"I'll see what I can do..." My daddy replied.

"Thank-you Daddy. Momma, why is the baby sick?" I asked.

"The mother saw it was sick and threw it out of the nest." She explained.

My Daddy took the baby bird and went into the house.

"Let's take a walk Taya." My Momma said.

Our small house is surroundied by feilds, and I loved to just gaze at the sky.

"Sure."

We walked into the feilds, and Momma became serious.

"Taya....odds are the baby bird isn't going to live. So you mustn't fret over it. This bird reminds me that we don't liver forever." She explained.

"Momma, look!" I exclaimed.

I pointed at a bird singing a sad tune on a willow branch.

"She's crying Momma, crying because she lost her baby." I explained to her.

More to come.



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PostFri Dec 13, 2002 4:14 pm    

Sweet. And the female form of Chakotay.... nice


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PostSat Dec 14, 2002 3:10 pm    

How sweet they little girl is just like her father

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PostSat Dec 14, 2002 6:55 pm    

Chapter One- This is me....

Hi! My name is Taya...Taya, just Taya. I don't really have a last name, because my father doesn't have one. My mom, even though she's married, goes by Kathryn Janeway. At my high school people call me 'Nature Girl', cause I'm more conforable around the birds and flowers than tricorders and warpcores. Though I have an affinity for nature I still know quite a bit about the statistics of a starship. For that I blame my mother. She always has high expectations of me, so I'm obligated to meet them. Maybe the expectations aren't high, maybe I put them there to challenge myself. My father on the other hand is all for nature, and when I was only six I was climbing trees, and had a deep respect for nature.

Today it was my sixteenth birthday, and my mom was having a small Mardi Gras. All of my friends were invited, my boyfriend Beau Andrea, was also coming. But of course my best friend forever Miral Paris, was a very special guest. Miral is one year older than me, but we are both in the eleventh grade. For reasons she'd rather you not know about (hint: she broke someone's arm).

"Taya. Taya..........." I heard, and I slowly woke up.

Standing over me was my mom, and she had a big grin on her face. I sat up and rubbed the sleep out of my eyes.

"Mom, what time is it?" I asked.

"Oh-four-hundred."

"You have got to be kidding me." I muttered.

"Your father wanted to show you something, an early present." She explained, so I got up and slipped on a pink robe.

Our ranch style house consists of two floors, each with five rooms. One the first floor was: kitchen, dining room, living room, bathroom, and study. On the second floor was: my parent's room, my room, a guest room, and three bathroom's.

I shrugged and we walked down stairs. My father stood at the front door.

"Happy Birthday." He said, and I sighed.

"Thank you Daddy." I replied, and we walked outside. He led us to a blanket spread out in a section of feild.

We sat down, and my Dad cleared his throat.

"Taya, today you become a woman, no longer a little girl. My people believe that when a person comes to manhood, or womanhood, they should hold on to a memory. I know you have lots, but let me give you one more." He explained, he took my hand and we stood up. Across the horizon the sun began to rise, and it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.

"Oh Daddy, it's wonderful. The dawn of a chapter in my life." I explained.

He smiled and we went back inside, and back to bed.

Chapter Two coming soon.



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PostSat Dec 14, 2002 6:59 pm    

oh i loved this one...I will keep coming back for more and LOL on the Miral Paris thing


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PostSun Dec 15, 2002 9:17 am    

Great... I agree with 09 completely


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PostMon Dec 16, 2002 10:49 am    

--------Capter Two-Inocence Lost---------

When I woke up, again, and it was oh-nine-hundred, I got dressed in a rather unusaul outfit. It was a white silk dress, and over it was a cover of beuatiful white beads. I also put a wite beaded anlket around my foot. I went and looked into my mirror, and took a good look at myself. My ebony hair fell just above my buttocks, and my blue eyes sparkled with joy. I had my mother's face, but my features were more dainty, and younger. I also had a dark tint in my skin from my father's side of the family. I Ran a brush through my hair and went to the dining for breakfast.

At the dining room table sat my mom, dad, and the Paris family. Tom and B'Elanna sat at one end, and opposite to them was my parents, and on one side was Miral.

"Morning." I said, taking a seat.

"Happy Birthday Taya." Miral said, and she looked unconfortable in her outfit. She was wearing dress pants and a blouse, not Miral. So I smiled to myself.

"Thank-you Miral." I said, and I grabbed the pot of coffee from the center of the table and poured myself a cup.

"So, the big sixteen. How does it feel?" B'Elanna asked.

"To tell you the truth I feel the same. I'm still me, just older." I expalined.

"Older? Your not older, your younger." My Mom said, and everybody but Miral smiled.

"Seems like only yesterday you were climbing trees, and picking wildflowers..." Tom said.

"Yeah, but I still do those things. I have yet to scale Old Timber." I expalined.

Old Timber was a sixty foot high willow tree, and I wanted so badly to climb it.

"Okay. Anyway, happy birthday Taya." He said, handing me a small box.

"Thank-you." I replied, and they all looked at me.

"Aren't you going to open it?" Daddy asked.

I removed the lid, and inside was a beautiful ruby pinky ring.

"Wow, thank-you both so much." I thanked, and Miral shot me a look of begging.

"You know, Miral and I are going to go to my swimming hole. If that's alright with you." I said, and I looked to my mother for her approval.

"Alright, have fun." She said.

I will finish Chapter two later.



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PostMon Dec 16, 2002 3:05 pm    

oh so gr8


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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 6:44 pm    

Miral and I walked towards the pond, swimming suits on, and towels over our shoulders. We were walking along, minding our own business, when we heard some rustling up ahead.

"What was that?" I asked, and we slowed our pace.

"I dunno. Maybe it's some wild thing come to eat us." She teased.

"Miral, you know wild things only eat people if they feel threatened." I expalined.

"You Taya, and only you would put your life in the hands of a rabid Klingon." She joked.

"Does that include you?" I teased back, and we heard the rustling again.

The pond that we were headed to was in a seculded part of the woods we were in. The path we were on was hard to find and very secret. All of a sudden out of the bushes walked Captain Hewlett, about thirty-five, and very good looking. His wife, Karen, owned a sucessful holo-novel publication. So they are rich, very rich.

"Oh, hello ladies." He said, getting closer. As he neared I smelt whiskey on his breath, he walked untill he was inches away.

"Yes sir?" I asked, and he came a little closer.

"So, how ripe are them apples?" He asked, leering at me.

Miral jumped him, knocking him to the forest floor. He quickly reacted by plunging a hypospray in his neck, and Miral fell, knocked out. He looked sorrowfully down at her, and stood up and faced me.

"Sixteen eh?" He asked, getting closer.

"Y-Y-e-s-s.....sir." I stammered. He neared me, and I stepped up to him, trying not to run away.

"You're beautiful Taya, your Momma raised you well. A real belle, I'll say." He explained, and I eyed the path behind me, he followed my gaze.

"Don't even think about it. If I can't have you I'll have her." He replied, nodding at Miral, who was still knocked out.

"Please sir, leave my friend alone, and let us be." I pleaded.

"Leave you be? Let me tell you what my life is like. My wife Karen is horrible, every time we make love I feel like a rapist." He expalined, and he grabbed my wrist, and it hurt.

"Please don't do this." I begged.

He prssed his lips against mine, and I gagged over the taste of whiskey when his tounge entered my mouth. I tried to push him away, but then he pushed the hypospray in my neck and I blacked out.

When I awoke Miral was kneeling over me.

"Oh my God Taya what happened?" She said, frantic.

I sat up, and realized I was nude. My clothes were strewn about everywhere, and my thigs were covered in blood.

It hit me then what happened, Captain Hewlett had gotten what he wanted, but thankfully Miral looked okay.

"Miral..........." I trailed off, and I broke into sobbs. She gave me a hug and stroked my hair.

"That bastard, I'm going to kill him Taya, look at what he did to you. I'll kill him with my bare hands." She threatened.

"No Miral, two wrongs don't make a right. What's done is done. If you kill him you're only sinking to his level." I expalined through my sobs.

"Taya, how could you say that, after what he did to you?" She asked.

I stood up and walked to the pond, giving myself a quick wash, and thankfully the blood was gone. I got dressed and we headed for home.

Chapter three next post.



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PostFri Dec 20, 2002 11:32 pm    

its very good


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PostSat Dec 21, 2002 4:16 pm    

:evil:Ok, now I am so MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Actually, that's a good sign that your story is touching.... It took an unexpected turn...

for Taya.



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PostSat Dec 21, 2002 9:26 pm    

Chapter Three- Can't Hide The Truth.....................

Miral and I sauntered back to my house, and we heard laughter coming from the inside. I felt weak in the knees and Miral embraced my shoulders.

"You gonna be okay?" She asked, and I laughed, falling to the ground. Miral knelt beside me and that struck me as funny.

"Taya? What is wrong?" She asked, and I broke into a knew fit of tears.

"Oh my God Miral, I'm so ashamed. Look at what I did." I sobbed.

"You didn't do anything! That creep did this to you, Taya, you are not a fault! Why didn't you run?" She asked, and I good see she meant business.

"He said if...if...I did run..then he'd..he'd..oh my God Miral he said he would take you instead." I cried, and Miral looked shocked.

"He said that?" I nodded. "Why didn't you let him?"

"Let him do those things to you....never." I replied.

"You did that for me? Wow Taya, that took guts. You really would go to hell and back for those ones close to you." She complimented.

We did return the party, and my parents never suspected a thing. The party went smoothly, and Beau gave me his class ring. But when he kissed me I thought of Captain Hewlett's kiss, and cringed. I went to bed early, and got ready to go to school the next day.

About two months later Miral and I graduated eleventh grade, and were glad to see summer come.

I woke up to the sun peeping through my widows. I slowly got out of bed, and was hit with a wave of naseau. I threw up everything that wasn't already out of my system. My Mom came to mt bathroom and saw me throwing up.

"Taya? Are you alright?" She asked, and she was wearing her robe.

"Yes Momma, I'll be fine." I replied, I quickly hopped in the shower. I got dressed and went down for breakfast, and my daddy and Momma looked up at me.

"Your mother told me you weren't feeling well." He said, sipping his coffee.

"I'll be alright Daddy." I replied. I fixed my self a cup of coffee and a peice of toast.

After I ate breakfast I ran upstairs and threw that up too. My parents came to my bathroom door.

"Taya I'm calling the Doctor." She announced. She left my bathroom, and I went down to the kitchen.

About fifteen minutes later the Doctor entered the room. He looked at me and I looked away. He pulled out a tricorder and ran some scans, his eyes widened and he looked at me.

"Have you been experiencing this naseau frequently?" He asked.

"Only for the past week or so."

"How often do you use the bathroom in this past week?" He asked.

"About a few more times then usual, but just to diddle." I replied, my Daddy then stepped closer to the Doctor.

"What's wrong with her?" He asked.

"Let me finishing asking a few more questions, and then I can tell you." The Doctor replied.

"Sorry Doctor." He apologized.

"Did you notice then when you did get your period you were sufficiantly late?" He asked.

"Yes, but I've always been irregular." I replied, and I felt hollow inside.

"Then the reason is clear. Naseau is an occurance in the first trimester of pregnancy." He replied, and my mom shook her head.

"Doctor, are you sure that she is pregnant? I know for a certainty that Taya is not the kind of girl to do this sort of thing." She expalined.

"I'm sorry Kathryn, but Taya is pregnant with an exceptionally healthy baby." He explained, and the all focused their attention on me.

I thought, and I knew for a fact who the child's father was, not Beau, but Captain Hewlett. You see Beau and I never.....we weren't that sort of couple.

"Momma.............." I trailed off. I sobbed, then the tears came, and my Mom embraced me. Then she cried, and I felt so ashamed.

"Who did it Taya? Who made you pregnant?" My Daddy asked.

"Daddy, I...was...well..you...see...." I trailed off.

"You didn't want to, did you Taya?" My Mom asked, stroking my hair.

I don't know where it came from, but I finally found the courage to tell them what happened. They all looked subdued after I finished.

"Oh bloody hell Kathryn. Look at what that...that *beep* did to our daughter. Taya...my poor Taya..." He said, with such hatred that I had never seen.

"Daddy don't! Just...let me think of something! I'm not having an abortion. I know that much. I have to speak to Captian Hewlett, he has to know." I expalined.

Chapter four, will be here soon.



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PostSun Dec 22, 2002 8:00 am    

I need another chapter!!!


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PostWed Jan 01, 2003 7:18 pm    

----------Chapter Four-Deal With The Devil

I slowly rose to my feet, my mother at my side. She, my father, and the Doctor didn't know what to make of what I just confessed. My father's face was red with anger, and my mother's eyes glassy with held-back tears. The Doctor had little facial expression, but he to was subdued.

"Momma, I don't want an abortion." I repeated.

"Taya, if you don't mind me asking, why not?" She asked, standing beside me.

"Ever since I was a baby I was taught respect for life, and even if that life is un-born it's still alive." I explained.

"She's right Kathryn. We taught her to respect life, no matter how great or small." My father said, smiling out of tension.

"I better leave this now before I get too involved. I'd like to say that this...man should be placed in...an...a jail." The Doctor said, he then gathered his things and left out the front door.

"I'm...well...I'm...just so sorry Momma. I...should've said something sooner. This is partly my fault." I said.

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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 10:55 am    

wow thats very good


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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 1:07 pm    

That's a great story, it's well written, it's full of unexpected twists - please keep going. I'm waiting for another chapter.

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PostThu Jan 02, 2003 3:13 pm    

It's great! Have you posted it somehwere else?


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PostSat Jan 04, 2003 4:35 am    

A very good story on a unconventional topic... keep up the good work

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PostTue Jan 07, 2003 6:27 pm    

Yes, we need more chapters

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"Your fault? It was..that THING, not you, unless there's something your not telling me...." My mom said, her voice cracking.

"No Momma, I told you everything I know." I replied, my voice barely above a whisper.

"He's at Starfleet Headquarters, and to think, I had him over for dinner. Was I blind Kathryn? Where did I go wrong?" My Daddy said, and I could tell both my parents were about to break down and cry.

"Then we have to speak with him. Daddy, we have to beam over to Headquarters and tell Captain Hewlett." I said, walking towards the study.

My parents followed me and when they were in we beamed over to Starfleet Headquarters. When we arrived we were informed the Hewlett was in a meeting with two other Captains. My Daddy didn't care, and he went to where the meeting was being held, my mom and I following closely behind.

The doors to the room opened, and at a breifing room table sat two Captains, and Hewlett. They all stood up.

"Dissmissed." Ordered my Daddy, and when Hewlett was about to walk by he thrust his arm in front of his chest.

"Not you, we need to speak." He said, and Hewlett took a few steps away from my fuming father.

"Yes, sir." Muttered Hewlett.

"We come here on un-oficail terms." My mother began.

"Yes ma'am."

"Where were you on the night of my daughter's sixteenth birthday?" My Momma asked, and my Daddy looked like he was ready to kill Hewlett on the spot.

"I was in my backyard, asleep, ma'am." He replied.

"Anyone who can verify this?" My Dad said, shooting a look that could kill Hewlett's way.

"N-n-o s-sir." Hewlett stammered.

"Is is possible that you were drunk, stole on to MY property, raped my TEENAGE daughter, and now she's here because she's carrying your child?! Well?" He asked, and stepped closer to Hewlett.

"I-I" Hewlett studdered.

"Answer me dammit!" My dad yelled. And before I could holler my father ran towards Hewlett, picked him up by his collar, and roughly shoved him against the wall.

"DADDY!" I yelled, and they all stopped to look at me.

"You once told me that violence is hardly ever the answer, and yet here you are doing this. Please just stop it!" I screeched.

"You would say this, after he raped you? Forced a child upon you against your will? This man doesn't deserve to breath." My Daddy replied.

"She's right Chakotay, violence isn't the answer. But I warn you Captain, if Taya was any different you'd be missing a limb or two." My Mom piped up.

Then the door to the breifing room opened, and in walked Clarence, Hewlett's wife. When she seen that my Daddy had Hewlett against the wall she stopped in her tracks.

"And just what is going on in here?" She asked.

"Your husband violated my daughter and made her pregnant." MY Dad said very non-chantly.

Clarence was a tought looking woman, she had sharp features, and was quiete tall. Her brown hair was pulled back tightly, and she was wearing a business suit.

"Is this true Harvey?" She asked, looking at me. I sat on a chair, and fiddled with my hands.

"Yes it is ma'am......I'm so sorry." I replied, and then I started to sob all over again.

"I swear I didn't do anything!" Hewlett promised.

"Tell us all how this 'predicament came upon us." She said.

I sat down and expalined everything from the time I woke up, untill the time I found Miral sitting over me.

"So, what do you say now Harvey?" Clarence asked.

"I didn't do anything!" He protested.

"Does that look like the face of a child who is lying?!" She yelled at her husband.

"I was drunk!" He admitted. Clarence shuddered.

"I may have a solution. As most of you know I have been unable to produce a child, and now I know it was me, not Harvey. I want to raise the child as if he or she were my own." She expalined.

"What?" My mother said aloud.

"You heard me." Clarence snapped back.

"It's not easy just handing over a child." My Daddy protested.

"But atleast he or she would have a chance." I piped up.

"Taya? Do you want to hand over you child th [i]them[/i]?" My mom asked.

"Momma, I think it would be best, What sort of a life could I offer this child? A life knowing that they were never supposed to happen? Yes, I will give the Hewlett's the child." I proclaimed.

"What about school?" My Dad asked.

"I could send her to Risa to have the child in secret. I would also hire a private instructor untill she can return to school." Clarence expalined.

"Okay, mom dad, I have to do what I think is right." I expalined.

"Right?" My Dad scoffed, "or just what they offer you."

"No Daddy, I want to give my child a chance." I explained.

More to come!



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PostThu Jan 09, 2003 11:01 pm    

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PostFri Jan 10, 2003 8:04 am    

Excellent story!

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PostFri Jan 10, 2003 3:47 pm    

Wonderful!!!!


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